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Bored In Manhattan

Bored in Manhattan No more, no more Manhattan .... Statue of Liberty although fine view of New York harbour, steep stairs and hot inside. Times Square- bright lights, shopping and shows, ball dropping on new year eve .... much but for its rich history. For skyscraper Empire State Building, long queued up for tickets, only to find those heights leave us hell frozen. Live musical concert in charismatic Central Park, scenic beauty and magnetic greens ... but those boring friends, I lost my spark, No more, no more Manhattan ..... Written Jan 5th, 2015 For contest by Julia ward Awarded HM

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Date: 1/31/2016 2:41:00 PM
Congrats on this; and don't give up on Manhattan, it's those boring friends who lost their spark.
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Date: 1/8/2016 10:14:00 AM
Great write, Dr. Upma A. Sharma, congratulations on your win !
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Date: 1/7/2016 1:58:00 PM
A good write Upma! Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 1/7/2016 10:38:00 AM
Well done on your HM Dr Upma :)
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Date: 1/7/2016 3:00:00 AM
Hi Dr. Upma. Congrats for your placement in the contest! ;-)
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Date: 1/7/2016 12:38:00 AM
Dr Upma, :) Congratulations!!! ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 1/6/2016 11:36:00 PM
nice win
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Date: 1/6/2016 3:51:00 PM
Upma...Congratulations on your win...best, Judy
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Date: 1/6/2016 3:13:00 PM
"Magnetic greens", in particular, ensured you had a place in my contest. Well done for your Honorable Mention, Upma, and thank you so much for entering... The contest was stuck at four entries for days, and Manhattan wondered if it would ever be boring enough. My next contest will be even harder - oh!
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Date: 1/5/2016 5:47:00 PM
I like the way you approached this, Upma. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/5/2016 11:01:00 AM
Oh the busy streets of NY, I know exactly where you're coming from, Upma! Very enjoyable and lighthearted piece, with rather prose-like language.
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