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ice coated fence posts

      punctuate the snowy trail…

          frosty whiffs of breath


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 Winter Haiku

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Kim Merryman

February 22, 2013 at 9:40 PM

Carrie, congrats on your win with this very vivid haiku! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

February 22, 2013 at 6:30 PM

an honest to GOODness haiku!! Congrats, lovely lady.

Poet Destroyer A

February 21, 2013 at 6:11 PM

Carrie,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA

Charlotte Puddifoot

November 19, 2011 at 3:38 PM

congrats on your win in the contest, a lovely wintry snapshot :-)

Andrea Dietrich

November 17, 2011 at 3:10 PM

This is so visual, Carrie. Gosh, both yours and mine could also work in the animal contest too, but I guess I better think of a new one. haha. Congrats here on a well deserved win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 17, 2011 at 11:17 AM

Congratulations Carrie on your win in this Haiku contest of Debbie Guzzi. Love, Carol

Cyndi Macmillan

November 17, 2011 at 5:35 AM

Great one, Carrie. I especially liked the word punctuate! They do look like exclamation marks, don't they? :-) Congrats on the win(d). Hugs to you, Cyndi

Sarah Seraphin

November 9, 2011 at 12:23 PM

* “I Love This Precious Painting * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Carrie * Allows Ones Imagination to Journey Through Its Canvas * Enchanting What They May Find * Brushing Colours & Angels * Or As Angels They Shall Be * Just Like You * Absolutely Beautiful * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *