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Borderline Balcony

gifts Romeo rose — he sees beauty not the thorns; Jule’s, the angel’s light crepuscular moon with grin tiptoe reach will kill the mood 11/3/2020

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Date: 11/6/2020 1:50:00 AM
You are reaching for the stars in this tanka, Kim. You are getting to be a Tanka Queen!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2020 6:53:00 AM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Date: 11/6/2020 1:20:00 AM
Poor Romeo and Juliet. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2020 6:53:00 AM
Such a sad story. To see them at balcony heights, knowing their lives are set to be short, though deep in love.
Date: 11/5/2020 6:32:00 PM
At least they're reaching for the stars! Another picture-book tanka, Kim. :) Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2020 7:20:00 PM
That we must do...
Date: 11/5/2020 2:37:00 PM
Pretty one!! I recall a joke I once heard: Juliet cries out: Romeo Romeo, where art thou, Romeo. To which she hears this response: Down here in the bushes. the ladder broke.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2020 7:20:00 PM
LOL...good one! :)

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