Borderline Balcony

gifts Romeo rose — he sees beauty not the thorns; Jule’s, the angel’s light crepuscular moon with grin tiptoe reach will kill the mood 11/3/2020
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Krutsinger Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 1:50 AM
You are reaching for the stars in this tanka, Kim. You are getting to be a Tanka Queen!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 6:53 AM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 1:20 AM
Poor Romeo and Juliet. ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 6:53 AM
Such a sad story. To see them at balcony heights, knowing their lives are set to be short, though deep in love.
Wolf Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 6:32 PM
At least they're reaching for the stars! Another picture-book tanka, Kim. :) Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 7:20 PM
That we must do...
Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 2:37 PM
Pretty one!! I recall a joke I once heard: Juliet cries out: Romeo Romeo, where art thou, Romeo. To which she hears this response: Down here in the bushes. the ladder broke.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 7:20 PM
LOL...good one! :)
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