Boozers - a Footle

Drink booze

     You lose

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 4 in Brian Strand's "Two Lines of Two Syllables" Contest - May 2011
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Taylor Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 7:59 PM
Nice going, Sarge. Congrats on a well written win. Ralphie
Kendrick Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 2:38 PM
Good advice..Congrats..Sara
Brown Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 5:46 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's Footle contest Bob. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 9:01 PM
Congratulations on your win, Robert!
Freeman Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 9:22 AM
A pleasure Friend! To see your success near the top, Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses
Poet Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 8:20 AM
Congrats Robert on your big win with this great write.
Dufresne Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 5:00 PM
ooh ...sounds like deja vu! great one Rob. congratulations to you
Devonshire Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 10:53 AM
I knew your footle would do well, Bob. Congratulations on your big win in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 10:18 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of brian strand, Bob
Sweetheart Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 9:11 AM
Congrats Bob on your big win in Brian's contest with this super cool and clever piece luv.. once again we are sharing winners list.. so awesome.. enjoy my friend..
Poetess Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 8:29 PM
Good verse. So true. thanks for your comment on my tomorrow poem. Love gf
Foulk Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 12:30 PM
You sure do, a great write from a great poet, good luck in the contest.
Onclaud Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 11:57 AM
ahhahaa, robert.. sounds like gambling too.. really smart! go for the win.. i likey, likey! :) huggs, nette
Brown Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 11:20 AM
Thank you for sharing your special poetry with us today Bob. Have a wonderful weekend and may you find inspiration to continue your writing along the way. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 11:15 AM
Well said, Bob! Now you've mastered another poetry form. I've seen quite a few entries that aren't really footles, but you nailed it and gave a great message as well. Winning wishes coming your way, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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