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Recognising each acts as of instinct, more oft than not seen driven by ego, we’re unaffected, being by love inked, for likewise we too were, not long ago, securing gains for ourself, blow by blow, thus we smilingly relinquish our share, hoping fallen souls will become aware, that there exists law of cause and effect, so it’s best if all sidestep desire snare, divine aligned, joyous, standing erect. 06-December-2021

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/6/2021 4:40:00 PM

Marvelously crafted Seeker! This is a difficult form. Your rhymes are creative and each line effortlessly carries your message. I love "hoping fallen souls will become aware," "driven by ego," "divine aligned." Sending you blessings "aligned, joyous, standing erect."

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/6/2021 4:51:00 PM

Thank you, dear Sam! Love employs no force, so we each must voluntarily choose to shift towards, into, God’s love energy

Bill Baker

Date: 12/6/2021 2:08:00 PM

I liked your poem Unseeking Seeker ... sounds a lot like Karma to me :-) Your friend, Bill

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/6/2021 4:49:00 PM

Exactly! Karma