Boom Boom Bang

Does your computer go click click click
Beep beep boop, boop boop  bop?
Does your computer go ding ding ding
toot toot teet? jump skip hop?

'cos mine goes boom boom bang!

Does your computer type up your notes
Store all your mail, Save all you pics
Does your computer hold all your songs, 
play all your games, do all the tricks?

'Cos mine goes boom boom bang!

I bought it to to type all up my notes
the beep beep bops, do all the tricks
I bought it for the toot toot teet, 
the beep beep bop, the click click clicks

'but it just goes boom, boom bang!

And at the store they promised me, 
it'd save my pics, jumps skips and hops
They promised me the ding ding ding
hold all the songs, the boop boop bops

'Never mentioned the boom boom bang!

Well I took it back just yesterday, 
The storeman he tried all the tricks... 
played all the games.. I had the pics!
And I told him just to beep beep boop.

'And the shop went boom boom bang!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/28/2016 10:59:00 AM
MELANIE, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love ** SKAT **
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Date: 4/28/2015 5:39:00 PM
Thank you everyone! :)
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Date: 4/18/2015 6:58:00 PM
Melanie, Congratulations on your fine win. LINDA
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Date: 4/18/2015 8:51:00 AM
Fun one! Congratulations.
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Date: 4/16/2015 3:06:00 PM
loved the humour and all the onomatopoeia - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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