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Poetry/Lyric/FreeVerse/Book of Souls
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Written, April 18, 2025
For the International Contest, The Book of Souls
Sponor, Robert James Liguori, Judged 04/22/2025

Fourth Place

Inspired by the song, The Book of Souls by Iron Maiden Below is my version. __________________
Instrumental Intro On a journey to find the book of souls the way is very long and quite dangerous in a meditation ... I am falling into the darkness down, down, down ... oh where will it end Finally, I stop falling and I am in a strange place where fires are burning and winds are howling alert and aware of a man rising from the ashes I will be your guide he whispers Distracted by his beauty for a moment I failed to see the monsters in this hellish place as imagined in Dante's Inferno ... horrible creatures and I cringe as a huge two-headed snake slithers by I swallow my fear and speak to my guide telling him that I am seeking the Book of Souls why he whispers ... and I tell him that I would like to see if my name is in it or not For in a fortelling in a dream vision in a revelation, was told seek the Book of Souls Seek the truth beyond the sun and moon and in the depths of hell seek the book of souls I tell him that I have been taught on earth the importance of the cycles and phases of planets and and stars swirling above us of the fear of hell that beckons below of a list that Satan keeps in a book Satan watches the cities growing on earth the high rise buildings reaching heavenward and the weakness of humans and the strength of some he whispers, you are strong to journey here my dear perhaps the book you seek is a book of lies I ask my guide, why are your here you seem like you do not belong in hell he laughs and the sound gives me shivers as his beauty fades away to reveal Satan For in a fortelling in a dream vision in a revelation, I was told seek the Book of Souls Seek the truth beyond the sun and moon and in the depths of hell seek the book of souls Instrumental Break And I realize that he is Satan, the invader of earth the trickster who can take any image to lure he is the destroyer of humans, the collector of souls and he is holding the book of souls Death is a journey we all must take will we fall into the darkness, down and down or will we fly heavenward above the clouds but still I wonder is my name in the book of souls The book of souls ... then, I am back

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Date: 4/24/2025 11:17:00 PM
I sure Steve would be impressed, and Bruce would like to sing these words.
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Date: 4/22/2025 10:50:00 AM
Wonderful lyrics. I enjoyed reading your poem a lot. Congrats on your placement.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/23/2025 3:52:00 AM
Robert, thank you for the contest and my wonderful placement and for the compliment and congrats, appreciate ~

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