Sotto Poet Poet Triolet

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Book and Brook

I became enamored with your weakness
My wishes-filled pages of the dream book.
And I hoped you'd link to my brokenness.
I became enamored with your weakness
But it's just your gushing moonlit sadness.
Could ne'er aim to the bottom of this brook.
I became enamored with your weakness
My wishes-filled pages of the dream book.

Written: March 14, 2023

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Bj Legros Kelley March 20, 2023 at 10:00 PM Beautiful poem Sotto.

Valsa George March 15, 2023 at 10:51 PM "My wishes-filled pages of the dream book." Love this line . A beautiful triolet marked with a tinge of melancholy!

Paige Hind March 15, 2023 at 12:38 PM Beautiful...!

Victor Buhagiar March 15, 2023 at 3:04 AM Lovely romantic poem.

Harry Horsman March 14, 2023 at 4:53 PM The brook serves you well, Lasaad, but it has a more powerful side to it, after the rains fall. Hope this poem will enter your dream book, it is so good. Love it.

Sara Kendrick March 14, 2023 at 3:24 PM Enjoyed reading your creative work. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Your comments keep me encouraged. Sara

Hat Bueckert March 14, 2023 at 1:37 PM The "hoped you'd link to my brokenness" got me right in the feels. This is sad and powerful and an excellent example of this form, imho. Adding this to my faves, thanks sir

Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2023 at 1:07 PM Interesting to be enamored with weakness but in certain flaws, yes, I can see how this would be so!!

Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2023 at 11:17 AM - "But it's just your gushing moonlit sadness" a touching and beautiful line, Las :) - hugs

Eve Roper March 14, 2023 at 10:55 AM Lovely write, Lasaad, so soothing and romantic. Hugs Eve