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I became enamored with your weakness My wishes-filled pages of the dream book. And I hoped you'd link to my brokenness. I became enamored with your weakness But it's just your gushing moonlit sadness. Could ne'er aim to the bottom of this brook. I became enamored with your weakness My wishes-filled pages of the dream book. Written: March 14, 2023

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Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 3/20/2023 10:00:00 PM

Beautiful poem Sotto.

Valsa George

Date: 3/15/2023 10:51:00 PM

"My wishes-filled pages of the dream book." Love this line . A beautiful triolet marked with a tinge of melancholy!

Paige Hind

Date: 3/15/2023 12:38:00 PM

Beautiful...!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/15/2023 3:04:00 AM

Lovely romantic poem.

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/14/2023 4:53:00 PM

The brook serves you well, Lasaad, but it has a more powerful side to it, after the rains fall. Hope this poem will enter your dream book, it is so good. Love it.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/14/2023 3:24:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative work. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Your comments keep me encouraged. Sara

Hat Bueckert

Date: 3/14/2023 1:37:00 PM

The "hoped you'd link to my brokenness" got me right in the feels. This is sad and powerful and an excellent example of this form, imho. Adding this to my faves, thanks sir

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2023 1:07:00 PM

Interesting to be enamored with weakness but in certain flaws, yes, I can see how this would be so!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2023 11:17:00 AM

- "But it's just your gushing moonlit sadness" a touching and beautiful line, Las :) - hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 3/14/2023 10:55:00 AM

Lovely write, Lasaad, so soothing and romantic. Hugs Eve