Teddy Kimathi Poet Monorhyme

Boo

Slowly he crept in the graveyard;
sounds of breaking twigs he heard.
Keeping a brave face was hard;
darkness had its wild card.
Out of the blue a black bird
flew past him, and rested as a guard
on a gravestone of a sorcerer thought to be mad.
“Boo!” the crow screamed with a voice so bad!
Suddenly he woke up, in hand a horror movie ad!




Date of Entry: 17/10/2017

Contest Name: BOO

Contest Sponsor: Alexis Y.

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Eve Roper February 10, 2018 at 2:38 PM Congratulations on your win, Teddy, enjoyed reading! Hugs Eve ~`* Teddy Kimathi March 9, 2018 at 6:29 AM Thank you so much for your kind applause, Eve! I'm glad you enjoyed it! *^_^*

Line Gauthier February 5, 2018 at 8:25 PM Congrats on your win, Teddy. I particularly loved the line "out of the blue a black bird". Teddy Kimathi March 9, 2018 at 6:27 AM Thank you so much for reading and applauding my work, Line! *^_^* Lolest, I hadn't noticed that I had penned two colors in a single line! :)

Alexis Y. February 5, 2018 at 7:19 PM Hi Teddy, Thanks for participating in my contest. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis Teddy Kimathi March 9, 2018 at 6:25 AM You are very much welcome, Alexis! It's such an honor to participate in your contest! Thank you so much for your warm applause!! *^_^*

John Michaels October 23, 2017 at 1:39 PM Nice story and a clever twist! Good luck in the contest. Regards, John. Teddy Kimathi November 13, 2017 at 5:59 AM Thank you for your kind applause, John! :-)

Arthur Vaso October 18, 2017 at 1:03 AM Great write Teddy! Liked that last line! Teddy Kimathi October 21, 2017 at 7:53 PM Thank you so much, Arthur! :-)

Charlie Smith October 17, 2017 at 12:01 PM Not a good read before bedtime, good one Teddy, best wishes in the contest... Teddy Kimathi October 21, 2017 at 7:53 PM Hi Charlie. Lolest, indeed it isn't. Thank you for your kind comment on my work! :-)

Nette Onclaud October 17, 2017 at 11:39 AM there is fun in horror movies, teddy... greeat development of the plot.. enjoyed this.. boo!..huggs Teddy Kimathi October 21, 2017 at 7:51 PM Hehehe. Boo! Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my piece, Nette! *^_^*

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 17, 2017 at 9:11 AM Lol love this! My best to you for the contest Teddy xomo :) Teddy Kimathi October 17, 2017 at 11:31 AM Lolest. Thank you for reading and enjoying my work, Maureen!! *^_^* I really appreciate it!!