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Boo

Slowly he crept in the graveyard; sounds of breaking twigs he heard. Keeping a brave face was hard; darkness had its wild card. Out of the blue a black bird flew past him, and rested as a guard on a gravestone of a sorcerer thought to be mad. “Boo!” the crow screamed with a voice so bad! Suddenly he woke up, in hand a horror movie ad! Date of Entry: 17/10/2017 Contest Name: BOO Contest Sponsor: Alexis Y.

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Date: 2/10/2018 2:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Teddy, enjoyed reading! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/9/2018 6:29:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind applause, Eve! I'm glad you enjoyed it! *^_^*
Date: 2/5/2018 8:25:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Teddy. I particularly loved the line "out of the blue a black bird".
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/9/2018 6:27:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading and applauding my work, Line! *^_^* Lolest, I hadn't noticed that I had penned two colors in a single line! :)
Date: 2/5/2018 7:19:00 PM
Hi Teddy, Thanks for participating in my contest. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/9/2018 6:25:00 AM
You are very much welcome, Alexis! It's such an honor to participate in your contest! Thank you so much for your warm applause!! *^_^*
Date: 10/23/2017 1:39:00 PM
Nice story and a clever twist! Good luck in the contest. Regards, John.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/13/2017 5:59:00 AM
Thank you for your kind applause, John! :-)
Date: 10/18/2017 1:03:00 AM
Great write Teddy! Liked that last line!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/21/2017 7:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Arthur! :-)
Date: 10/17/2017 12:01:00 PM
Not a good read before bedtime, good one Teddy, best wishes in the contest...
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/21/2017 7:53:00 PM
Hi Charlie. Lolest, indeed it isn't. Thank you for your kind comment on my work! :-)
Date: 10/17/2017 11:39:00 AM
there is fun in horror movies, teddy... greeat development of the plot.. enjoyed this.. boo!..huggs
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/21/2017 7:51:00 PM
Hehehe. Boo! Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my piece, Nette! *^_^*
Date: 10/17/2017 9:11:00 AM
Lol love this! My best to you for the contest Teddy xomo :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/17/2017 11:31:00 AM
Lolest. Thank you for reading and enjoying my work, Maureen!! *^_^* I really appreciate it!!

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