Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Bonnie Birdsong

Bonnie birdsong tickles my ears,
echoing in the hall of hearing,
thrusting my head in upward spin.

A yellow canary chirps out secrets.
Bonnie birdsong tickles my ears
in the forest of morning dew.

I look for the little stranger,
as he alights on a leafy branch.
Bonnie birdsong tickles my ears.

3/3/2018

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Reason A. Poteet March 3, 2018 at 6:31 PM Lilting and light. We've moved beyond the trees and I miss the familiar sounds of birds. Often I would imagine their chirps in English as a familiar 3-4 syllable word or phrase repeated over and over again. Love your repeating line, Kim. Kim Rodrigues March 3, 2018 at 7:18 PM Thank you, Reason! I love having trees :)

Line Gauthier March 3, 2018 at 5:46 PM Uplifting and delightful... Spring is in the air. Well done, Kim. Kim Rodrigues March 3, 2018 at 5:56 PM Thanks, Line!

Paul Callus March 3, 2018 at 5:37 PM This is lovely and it's music to the ears, Kim! Is this your own form? Regards // paul Kim Rodrigues March 3, 2018 at 5:56 PM Just a little repetition! Thanks, Paul!