Bonks Your Coconut

Ah the smell of coffee in a paper cup Like a vision of heaven with both eyes shut The overwhelming joy Like your first kiss as a boy Your senses reel and it bonks your coconut
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Godwin Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 10:03 AM
I'm more than a coffee lover, I'm a coffee must-haver. This is great, Jack. CayCay
Ellison Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 10:13 AM
I'm behind schedule... only on my second cup!!! WOW! You sound upbeat like me!!! YEE HAW! Lovesies, Jacko xxx
Flats Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 8:35 AM
AMEN! HALLELUJAH! and PRAISE THE BEAN!!!//Bestest limerick ever seen//on my second cup//it's in my prenup//without coffee I get mean. (Very apt analogy, dear Jackson of the wisdom cracker) BONK ON BOCEPHUS!!!
Ellison Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 8:43 AM
As I speak (or almost... ack!) just about to head in the galley and maketh meself another mug of that divine brew!!! BONK BONK!!!
Sivey Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 6:25 AM
I don't like coffee, but I'll settle for the wonderment of a good Energy Drink! I really enjoyed your coconut of a write, you have delved into the realms of a shredded coconut meat, a great showing of amazement...fun fun my friend! What a grandiose piece, Awesome Work!!
Ellison Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 6:33 AM
To each his own as they say! However methinks you're outnumbered by a very large margin!!! lol
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