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Bonks Your Coconut

Ah the smell of coffee in a paper cup Like a vision of heaven with both eyes shut The overwhelming joy Like your first kiss as a boy Your senses reel and it bonks your coconut

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/1/2018 9:03:00 AM

No better smell, Starbucks here we come.

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/1/2018 9:13:00 AM

Yee Haw... Starbucks sends me to the moon!!! There is nothing finer on this spinning globe!!! Good to the very last sip!!!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/1/2018 8:36:00 AM

No coconuts here, I have my "quicker picker uppers" sopping up my spilled coffee- the booby bib ;p

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/1/2018 11:44:00 AM

Gotta write one with that as a theme if I can have yours and your Grandma's permission!!!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/1/2018 10:38:00 AM

They skipped a generation, Grandma and I shared this joke-

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/1/2018 8:42:00 AM

"the booby bib"!!!!!!!!!! Love it! Love your humor Miss Mo!!! Methinks we're both a little dipsy! LOL XOXOX

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 11/1/2018 5:39:00 AM

Your senses reel and it bonks your coconut /// I enjoyed this line

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/1/2018 5:45:00 AM

LOL, some early morning silliness!!! Thanks for dropping by my friend!!!