Bonfire Dance

Flame swirls in bonfire
Feet waltz flies ash near and far
Strange shapes of shadows appear.
The bodies lose light
Fire gets lost within bright
Silhouettes dance in delight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Barden Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 6:34 PM
Wonderful images and very unusual write, Subimal - I enjoyed this! Congrats on your win, my friend! :-)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 14, 2017 at 10:50 PM
Thank you, Greg.
Dietrich Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 5:47 PM
that is some GREAT imagery, Subimal. I just love the how it turned into silhouettes dancing.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 12:07 AM
Thank you, Andrea for your visiting and liking the bonfire dancing.
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