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Poetry/Rhyme/Bones Ache Yet Heart Sings
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1556-836-21
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written June 21, 2023
For the International Standard Contest, Bones Ache Yet Heart Sings
sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 07/02/2023

First Place

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"Grief and heartache are like ocean waves, at times calm, and at times the waves are crashing and roaring." Quote by _Constance
Bones, bones, bones, the decayed relics of my loved; and though there is no wind- it still moans, moans, in the graveyard where I weep the dear-loved. This grief I cannot shake, I am wrapped in anguish and deep heartache; each treasure of theirs- now my own keepsake. I must must must, transcend this grief and in God trust; for in time, I will be dust. Walking through the graveyard I read the stones, birds serenade from trees above; and I thank God for each new daybreak, as I hum a lullaby song for those who are only dust.

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Date: 7/3/2023 9:37:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Congrats for your win.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/6/2023 2:33:00 PM
Jay, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, God Bless !
Date: 7/3/2023 5:50:00 AM
Beautifully written and described!,
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Constance La France
Date: 7/6/2023 2:33:00 PM
Angela, thank you so much for the compliment, God Bless !
Date: 6/22/2023 12:13:00 PM
Only a masterful artist like Constance could produce such a magnificent poem. It is a remarkable gift to convey the profound emotions that one can endure while remaining resolute in strength. I am enamored by your exquisite verse, and the seamless rhythm only enhances its beauty. Is it another version of the fragmented rhyme, please?
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Constance La France
Date: 6/22/2023 12:53:00 PM
Sotto, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and my writing, yes, it is another version of fragmented rhyme !
Date: 6/21/2023 6:28:00 PM
May God bless, comfort, guide and fill you with His peace, love, spirit and joy in abundance: ). Very beautiful gift you have to share with others the heartache that one can face but yet stand firm with strength, love your poem and the flow goes so well
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Constance La France
Date: 6/22/2023 8:03:00 AM
Stephan, thank you so much for the comment and compliment !
Date: 6/21/2023 11:37:00 AM
I feel your pain, God bless you.
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Constance La France
Date: 6/21/2023 12:23:00 PM
Jay, thank you so much for the compassion and comment !

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