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Bone Spur Footle

Shoulder
Boulder

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/27/2011 7:51:00 AM

Oh dear, I hope I can escape surgery of my left shoulder and right elbow! Did you have problems too? I had some physiotherapy but without great success.

Don Johnson

Date: 7/19/2011 4:25:00 PM

spur in foot, a boulder hurts, sorry toots, short n sweet, good job babe, xo' Don

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2011 2:11:00 PM

Hey, that is what just happened to ME. They took a huge bone spur from my shoulder! Has it happened to you?

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 7/19/2011 11:29:00 AM

Cute! In answer to your last question, the economy in Britain is not good. Growth is slow and very fragile. Government cuts (both central and local government) are biting deep and hard. Libraries are closing down, some hospitals are under threat and the armed forces are to be reduced to the lowest levels for more than 100 years!!! My oh my!!! What has become of us??? love, Robert.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/19/2011 10:32:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today Doris.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/19/2011 9:58:00 AM

That is what it feels like for sure...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work...Mom

John Smith

Date: 7/19/2011 7:57:00 AM

Yes, and I've had that! So concise I feel it again. The wordy version: "Your shoulder boulder will grow colder as you get older the soldier told her. Said he couldn't hold her so filed her folder and the polder-geist he sold her would moulder long before... " Too much fun!

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