Bond of Love - Mother

Oh Mother!
You bear nine months pain,
Out of sheer bond of love,
And a life is born.

The empty slate,
waits for a template.
You give the direction,
I catch the innovation.

Your tolerance 
killed my breathless impatience
Your perseverance,
Killed my indolence
Your selflessness,
Killed my selfishness.

Demolition of the animal of hatred in me,
Done by your sheer bond of love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 8:32 PM
SANDEEP, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
Oyewole Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 11:32 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest Sandeep. Very deep and well penned. AO
Dey Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 11:41 PM
Thank you so much, this appreciation will motivate me to write more, Regards, sandeep.
A  Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 10:41 AM
Your poem is wonderful, sad, deep, and a killer poem to read. I don't know why i said that. But, killing ones way of life would leave me in hate too. like I said a killer poem. LOVE~ SKAT
Dey Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 10:55 AM
Thank you for your thoughts and interpretation. i am so sorry, i could have used some softer words in place of killed, i did not meant to leave anyone in hatred, its just to emphasize the change of bad ways in ones life to good ways, most of the time comes from mother's love.......Best wishes, sandeep
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