Bond of Love

You are completely my extension: Most of the time trying to seek my attention; From the depth of my soul you are my life: All others are teasing me to become your wife; You have already entered my heart like a violent storm: So please,come and swipe me against the norm; Your love sighs ..,echoes to me.. No matter how long is our physical distance: I would just wish to come beside you.. And calm your heart's feelings by my assistance; Let's retain faith in our love really strong: And sorry for making you wait so long; ! 9-4-2020 ~DEEPA~ First place in BRIAN'S CHOICE 5,any form, any theme Poetry contest.:-)

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/17/2020 5:58:00 PM

Hello V. Deepa,this is a beautiful rhyme. I like the words all flow together. Enjoy yout evening my friend.

V. Deepa
Date: 5/19/2020 1:19:00 PM

Thankyou for the support and comment once again for the same poem Mam.I am happy that I pleased you to read it the second time.:-)

Gideon Idudje

Date: 5/8/2020 3:39:00 PM

Hello Win Bravo!

V. Deepa
Date: 5/9/2020 5:08:00 AM

Thanks a bunch for your appreciation and support:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/9/2020 7:37:00 AM

Hello V.Deepa, yes keep that love between you and your boyfriend alive. I am happy for you. I wish you all the best. Stay safe. Enjoy your day my friend. Create mor poetry.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/10/2020 1:26:00 PM

Hello V. Deepa, I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Have a nice day my friend. be safe.

V. Deepa
Date: 4/9/2020 9:22:00 AM

Okay ma'am Sure !! THANKYOU