Bon Jour

An eighteen year old sailor on the Riviera in the Spring
Mademoiselle Your smile can make my young heart sing
Cannes, Nice, Monte Carlo who could ask for more
I volunteered for the USO, so on duty days I could be ashore
I held her hand and said bon jour, i danced with her that day
Looking into her eyes, Aime-moi, s'il vous plait
Stopping by a sidewalk cafe, we had a glass of Beaujolais
Then I walked her home and promised to meet another day
Two days later I returned but she was nowhere to be found
I saw her one more time before my feet left solid ground
It was a one time memory, a love not meant to be
She returned to college and I returned to the sea
I still have those memories and the wonders that we saw
But to cry, i'l n'est pas necssaire pour cela.
I think back sometimes and it cuts me like a knife
France will always be a special part of my life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kithinji Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 7:53 AM
C'est trite toujours! But she might chance by this poem one day. And voila!
Kithinji Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 7:57 AM
Trite, no, triste! Very sad. Great poem Vince.
Allen Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 10:42 AM
AHa The one that got away. Mine was a young Italian sailor who came to out shores when I was in my 20's We dated while his ship was stationed here from Italy for war games. When he left he gave me his address which I managed to loose. Needless to say that was the end of that. Memorie lane revisited. TLee
Kithinji Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 7:50 AM
I wanted to write you a missive, but then I forgot your address. And at the same time, my love, I forgot your name!
Bickerstaffe Avatar
July 1, 2012 at 11:13 PM
Ahh, memories... a wonderful reminiscence, Vince! A nice, gentle cadence and great couplet rhyming. Even though I have never been to France, this poem took me there. Great job! Keith
Brown Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 5:37 AM
A belated congratulations Vince on your placement in Cyndi's "Un, Deux, Trois" contest. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 2:31 AM
Vince congrats on your win...David
Bickerstaffe Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 8:11 PM
I love your long lines, and your couplet rhyming... quite an emotional piece, wistful, with lots of vivid imagery. Well done, Vince! Best wishes, Keith
Loving Iii Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 8:40 PM
i know those emotions. i had seen cassablanca a thousands times before i knew what it was about. and the lights went on in my head and suddenly i knew, i was'nt the only one. there was humphry bogart too that knew how i felt. and that is what poetry is. bringing to light what is in the darkness. saying that there is nothing new under the sun.
Loving Iii Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 8:30 PM
"We'll always have Paris." sound familiar?
Loving Iii Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 8:34 PM
ok, rick. play it again, sam.
May Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 8:39 PM
very nice write Vince..who knows maybe you will meet again..thanks for stopping by..best wishes..Joseph
Salama  Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 5:45 PM
Oh, this is a wonderful poem about a beautiful memory! I really like that you included some French in the poem. It is such a lovely remembrance. :)
Kendrick Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 2:29 PM
Ah!...Passionate memory..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..If this is for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the kind review of my work..I appreciate the time spent there reading..Sara
Andresen Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 12:09 PM
Bon Jour - Lovely and sweet memories poem Vince. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Burton Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 8:15 PM
Flowed like a song there. Enjoyed, have a great night.
Flach Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 8:43 PM
Thanks for taking us along on the trip Vince. Very intelligent and very fun journey your words took us on. Ahhh, love in French Riviera, what a perfect place for a poem. Joe
Onclaud Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 9:44 AM
romantic flavor down to the last line, you amant!..:) huggs
Lu Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 9:36 AM
absolutely love your story poems! Cindy/ Lucinda :)
Lu Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 9:36 AM
absolutely love your story poems! Cindy/ Lucinda :)
Beer Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 8:18 PM
It reminds me of my grandson. The same thing happened to him but it as in San Francisco. But memories are there. Thanks for your kind words on my poem.
Beer Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 8:18 PM
It reminds me of my grandson. The same thing happened to him but it as in San Francisco. But memories are there. Thanks for your kind words on my poem.
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 10:39 AM
I have a similar memory but it was in Spain. Very lovely nostalgia, Vince.
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