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Boluwatife

Brilliant young girl Old in character Lovely and fun to be with Unarguably, a rare jewel Wearing on her face, A gap- toothed grin That sparkles like rainbow In that smile, there's vigour Fidelity, her watchword Enthralling all, her virtues

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/9/2017 8:06:00 PM
Good one. Simile of rainbow touched. Good short poem. Keep it up. Let's be in touch even more through such poems and reviews. Be blessed and keep reviewing Pari Style poems.
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 12/10/2017 5:03:00 AM
Thank you for such love you've shown Sanket. Much love and joy to you and your household. Adeniji.
Date: 10/2/2017 7:36:00 PM
Now we too can visualize this lovely girl.
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 10/3/2017 7:02:00 AM
Really? That's good to hear, Richard. Thank you very much.
Date: 6/4/2017 7:01:00 AM
A vivid portrait; you bring her to life in the most delightful way:) Amitiés
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 6/4/2017 6:54:00 PM
Oh! Thank you Anne. The young girl is such a rare gem.

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