Boluwatife

Brilliant young girl
Old in character
Lovely and fun to be with
Unarguably, a rare jewel
Wearing on her face,
A gap- toothed grin
That sparkles like rainbow
In that smile, there's vigour
Fidelity, her watchword
Enthralling all, her virtues
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Jain Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 8:06 PM
Good one. Simile of rainbow touched. Good short poem. Keep it up. Let's be in touch even more through such poems and reviews. Be blessed and keep reviewing Pari Style poems.
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 5:03 AM
Thank you for such love you've shown Sanket. Much love and joy to you and your household. Adeniji.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 7:36 PM
Now we too can visualize this lovely girl.
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 7:02 AM
Really? That's good to hear, Richard. Thank you very much.
Coreggia Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 7:01 AM
A vivid portrait; you bring her to life in the most delightful way:) Amitiés
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 6:54 PM
Oh! Thank you Anne. The young girl is such a rare gem.
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