Body Wise

Vitamin D for you for me Sunlight and air; both still free Quinine in tonic water clear Filters blood in hearts so dear To exercise in many ways Four good steps to enrich your days. ©Joe Maverick 7-2-2023

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/10/2023 7:18:00 AM

Too much of a good thing, isn't the way, even when it comes to exercising... I think that maintaining one's health doesn't have to be so complicated as society has made it seem... I really like your view points in this eye opening poem. Very well done, Joe!

Joe Maverick
Date: 4/11/2023 9:32:00 AM

Kelly I only have rudimentary Knowledge on medicine..All I Knew was there was quinnine In tonic water..When I wen't Down with novelle flu So I Thought just keep drinking it I knew its good for maleria this Was well before Trump and the Hydroxycloraquinne whatever thing.' Anyway it worked.' Thank you For commenting.'

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/14/2023 11:20:00 AM

Wisdom, you possess. Congratulations! And well Britten panagiotz —-

Joe Maverick
Date: 2/15/2023 3:29:00 AM

Thank you Pangie, any Wisdom is from the Lord and His teaching.' And i don't Listen enough I think.?

Bill Baker

Date: 2/12/2023 4:24:00 PM

I'm with you Joe, good advice! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Joe Maverick
Date: 2/13/2023 11:52:00 AM

Glad you consider it valid Advice Bill.' There may of course Be the odd person its not good For, as argued by the mnra Conspiritors that managed to Carry through on their plan to Inject people worldwide' with it Now appears a lot more injured Than they at first advised.'

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2023 8:34:00 PM

Excellent, Joe and so very wise.

Joe Maverick
Date: 2/9/2023 2:02:00 AM

Thank you compadre' I Did this intending that it could Be learned off by heart so an Inbuilt guide for people '

Speaks Volumes

Date: 2/8/2023 6:29:00 PM

OR D for dainty cakes with cream .......... To block out suns rays use sunscreen ........ Juicy sweet cordial in water clear ...... adds a bit of glucose but so does beer .... Exercise sitting writing poetry to cheer .... Four good ways - to enjoy your days .... OK JOE- I agreed Yours was better ! In fact I loved it,, great advice.

Joe Maverick
Date: 2/9/2023 2:03:00 AM

All love Wendy..Stay strong Blessings to Jemma.'

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/8/2023 11:59:00 AM

Hello Paula, thank you for stopping by!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/8/2023 11:49:00 AM

A creative "Body Wise" write. Have a blessed day..................

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/8/2023 8:07:00 AM

Great one Joe :)

Joe Maverick
Date: 2/8/2023 11:50:00 AM

Thank you Heidi' In reading the comment below I Am wondering whether its in More concentrated form that May not be so good for you..? In my case 2019 and knowing Nothing other than its efficacy Against maleria Its all I used plus ibrofen to Fight of the covid that was trying to take My right eye' and had me learning To walk again after it passed' 6 weeks long it went on ( i can look Anyone in the face ) no ventilator As it was not advertised to be here that year.'

Di11y Da11y

Date: 2/8/2023 5:31:00 AM

Well I've just googled quinine and it's not as healthy as I thought! Glad your poem prompted me to check it out :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/9/2023 4:50:00 AM

Not sure but I think I'll have a lot less

Joe Maverick
Date: 2/8/2023 12:12:00 PM

There is a summation also by Rejvu wellness..I don't know how That stacks up against any other Expertise you may draw on?

Joe Maverick
Date: 2/8/2023 11:42:00 AM

Is it in a 'tonic water?' Or more Concentrated form.'