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Body Dance

Enjoys by hearing
                                   legs,fingers and body dance
                                               own music is on















Written by: bldevnath
September: 17th 2011

Copyright © Bl Devnath | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/21/2011 2:48:00 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Any Haiku Will Do" BL. Love, Carol Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 9/22/2011 1:32:00 AM Thanks for giving congratulation to me. Am waiting to congratulate you more and more for your win. Pl. give me chance. Thanks, bl

Debbie Guzzi Date: 9/18/2011 8:21:00 PM with haiku a simple way to approach it is to ask can I take a snapshot containing the content? the grammatically connected 2 lines usually contain the subject and the scene, line 3 using makes a mental leap which does relate to lines 1 &2 and could be say another bit of sensory input to draw the reader into what the poet was LOOKING at..hope this is a bit of help..light& love and thanks so much for stopping by!!! Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 9/19/2011 11:25:00 AM Many thanks for your stopping by. My friend, I truthfully want to say that what comes out of flow of thoughts, I try to write as it is, but many times I succeed. Thanks for your nice comment. bl

Black Eyed Susan Date: 9/18/2011 11:06:00 AM nicely described. congratulations on your win! Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 9/19/2011 11:26:00 AM Thanks my friend for your comment and for giving congratulation. bl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/18/2011 9:24:00 AM CONGRATS BL ON WONDERFUL FIFTH PLACE WIN LUV.. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/18/2011 3:48:00 AM BLD,. a nice congratulations on your win, *<:-). Thank you so much for entering and sharing your poem.Thanks for supporting my contest,, God bless,... LINDA Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 9/17/2011 10:44:00 AM Your few words take me to the dance with all th magic that being in someone's arms can bring. To float around to music is wonderful. Nicely done dear friend! Login to Reply