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Bobby May Is a Thief

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My sneaky big brother Bobby May stole my trick and treat candy today He plays the same trick every year, then laughs at me when I shed a tear So this year I made sure that I got even and added Ex Lax choc from Uncle Steven The time has come to call it quits - cos Bobby May has got the squits! If I were your brother Poetry Contest Sponsored Bobby May 10/16/19

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Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 11/2/2019 9:15:00 AM

Congrats on your win Jan. Enjoying reading your poem once again. Brothers shouldn't mess with us. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 11/3/2019 3:12:00 PM

We are not to be trifled with Cecilia lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/1/2019 7:14:00 PM

lol....exlax is no fun...this made me laugh...congratulations on your top win :) hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 11/3/2019 3:12:00 PM

thanks so much Sandra - I hope I never have the need to try it !!:-) hugs Jan xx

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 11/1/2019 4:59:00 PM

Fun poem with a funny twist! Good Job!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/3/2019 3:12:00 PM

thanks so much Timothy:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina

Date: 11/1/2019 5:56:00 AM

Hilarious Jan. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs // Charlie xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/3/2019 3:11:00 PM

thanks so much Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 10/31/2019 5:31:00 PM

CONGRATS on a 1st in the competition JAN. Wonderfully penned...Ron x

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 5:56:00 PM

thanks Ron:-) hugs Jan xx

Hello There

Date: 10/30/2019 2:16:00 PM

Yikes! A hilarious win ~ Congratulations!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 5:56:00 PM

thanks so much:-) hugs Jan x

Curtis Moorman

Date: 10/30/2019 10:02:00 AM

Congrats on your 1st place win! Now Bobby can sing this little ditty....Jan slipped me a dose of exlax I can't stop running, bless my soul I haven't time to just relax Except on the toilet bowl

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 5:55:00 PM

ha ha ha love it Curtis:-) hugs Jan xx

Bobby May
Date: 10/30/2019 10:08:00 AM

LOL Curtis

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/30/2019 9:27:00 AM

Hi Jan, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 5:55:00 PM

thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2019 8:56:00 AM

- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 5:53:00 PM

thanks Anne-lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Bobby May

Date: 10/30/2019 8:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win JAN, now will you trade poems so I can win?

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2019 5:53:00 PM

I would if I could dear bro:-) hugs jan xx

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 10/29/2019 11:06:00 AM

A means to an end! Delightful write Jan. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 10/29/2019 12:03:00 PM

Thanks Cecilia:-) hugs jan xx

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 10/29/2019 6:01:00 AM

It all comes out in the end, Jan. Best to you in the contest, and thanks for reading my dog's demise. / M

Jan Allison
Date: 10/29/2019 10:46:00 AM

oh Maurice so sorry its your treasured pet that is such sad news:-( hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/29/2019 10:45:00 AM

lol I love that comment Maurice - he wouldn't sit down comfortably if he ate ex lax lol :-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/20/2019 3:54:00 PM

Lol! Jan, This is so you, that will teach him not to steal from you. Haha, he will be in the loo for hours. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day my friend:-) Alexid

Jan Allison
Date: 10/20/2019 4:08:00 PM

thanks Alexis so sorry for the delay in replying have been away, had dire internet connection at times and my muse has vanished of late:-( hugs Jan xx