Bob, the Forgotten Valentine and Greedy Double Dater

My friends, this saga slowly unfurls
 a love story that went quickly awry,
 seems greedy Bob dated a pair of girls
 when with one, to the other he’d lie.
 
The homlier girl’s name was Edith
 who, nonetheless Bob was fond of,
 but, greedy Bob wanted to live out the “myth”
 and with sisters, he was sure to find love !
 
He began slyly asking about sister Kate
 for her beauty was equalled by few,
 she was young, and he believed her well worth the wait
 she had enough sex appeal for two !
 
Bob’s antics had him severely troubled
 because, he covered his tracks day and night,
 his love-making prowess had quickly doubled
 so his lovelife was going just right !
 
Well, finally Bob’s saga ended in terror
 because the girls both found out what he’d done,
 Bob had mixed their names up, in a passionate error
 and what transpired next, was not very fun !
 
One of the sisters had taken Bob’s life
 because he’d proven he couldn’t be “true”,
 and the lesson he learned, at the end of that knife
 taught, “you can’t have your Kate…..and Edith, too !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 9, 2016 at 11:06 PM
David, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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February 12, 2013 at 10:47 AM
Belated congratulations on your win David xx
A   Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 9:21 PM
David:-) ... Congratulations, with your awesome poem in Debra s "The Forgotten Valentine... " contest... glad to see you on the winning list. Always & Forever* PD
Squyres Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 1:19 PM
Now I know who wrote this delightful poem...well, Congratulations you've made it on the Winners List !! Thanks so much for your entry !! I enjoyed this very much !!
Fisher Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 3:34 PM
That was a hoot! It seems like I've heard that ending before, somewheres, but never the rest, of course. Good luck in the contest if that's planned.
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