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unrhymed quatrains
written in 10,9,9,10 syllable counts 
ten is perfect holds cloud nine 
twelve lines a host the sacred heart

I see the shadows soft inside starlight 
beauty illuminates one queen true
deep within the bones it dwells ashes 
a drunken spirit's kiss lives hot fire

Burns ultra violet turns blue heaven's 
colours of amazing grace's promise
white dove you fly deeply inside pure
rose you bleed into heartbeats crimson love

Crowning of the temple angelic gift
dawn awakening within jewels 
blinding beautiful I am held 
captivated by a vision of you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/10/2016 5:37:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 10/10/2016 5:11:00 PM
A wonderfully written piece of poetic art. The love is evident in this softly flowing work. really nicely done.
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Date: 10/10/2016 4:43:00 PM
Liam..everyday I watch you grow more as a poet....This is a gem..So beautiful.A fave.
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Date: 10/10/2016 4:37:00 PM
Beautiful write and romantic a7
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