Blushing Ruby Gem Petals Touch

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unrhymed quatrains
written in 10,9,9,10 syllable counts
ten is perfect holds cloud nine
twelve lines a host the sacred heart

I see the shadows soft inside starlight beauty illuminates one queen true deep within the bones it dwells ashes a drunken spirit's kiss lives hot fire Burns ultra violet turns blue heaven's colours of amazing grace's promise white dove you fly deeply inside pure rose you bleed into heartbeats crimson love Crowning of the temple angelic gift dawn awakening within jewels blinding beautiful I am held captivated by a vision of you

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/10/2016 5:37:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Chris Green

Date: 10/10/2016 5:11:00 PM

A wonderfully written piece of poetic art. The love is evident in this softly flowing work. really nicely done.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/10/2016 4:43:00 PM

Liam..everyday I watch you grow more as a poet....This is a gem..So beautiful.A fave.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/10/2016 4:37:00 PM

Beautiful write and romantic a7