unrhymed quatrains written in 10,9,9,10 syllable counts ten is perfect holds cloud nine twelve lines a host the sacred heart
I see the shadows soft inside starlight beauty illuminates one queen true deep within the bones it dwells ashes a drunken spirit's kiss lives hot fire Burns ultra violet turns blue heaven's colours of amazing grace's promise white dove you fly deeply inside pure rose you bleed into heartbeats crimson love Crowning of the temple angelic gift dawn awakening within jewels blinding beautiful I am held captivated by a vision of you
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