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Blushing Morns, Nighttime Moons

Tender words on gentle tides Where water meets the land So on the moist breeze rides To cuddle within warm sand As sweet thoughts begin fading Dispelled with the morning dew Hushed sighs are collaborating Quickened breath will then ensue Tickle my mind with silly notions Gentle waves whispered wishes Dipped quills in golden emotions Dreaming nighttime full eclipses Magical words sweet inspiration Blushing morns, nighttime moons Encouraging natures invitation An insightfully creative cocoon
1st place in Brian strands contest! https://youtu.be/NxbTaHqucW4

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Date: 2/20/2020 10:24:00 PM
Beautiful.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/21/2020 10:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Juliet I appreciate that!;)
Date: 1/30/2020 9:01:00 AM
Oh my Gosh you have been busy -- yet another contest! Most definitely you are now one of the Soups most premier contest writers Miss Poetess...and I am certain no one is going to contradict me on that; and before I forget...beautiful poetry also. Many congratulations, Brenda! Lots of affection. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/30/2020 7:07:00 PM
Ahhh John thank you so very much! I so appreciate your wonderful comments! As always you bring a smile to my lips!;)
Date: 1/27/2020 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations Brenda! :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/27/2020 3:17:00 PM
Gary thank you!;)
Date: 1/26/2020 9:50:00 PM
Brenda, Congrats and kudos!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2020 11:22:00 PM
Sam lol thanks so much!;)
Date: 1/26/2020 8:39:00 PM
Indeed, a very 'creative cocoon' woven by a talented, passion writer of whispered romance. Bravo, Brenda! Peace and Joy, Gershon (and how about good health too!)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2020 11:22:00 PM
Ahh gershon what would I do without you my dear friend! Who always brings a smile to my face!;)
Date: 1/26/2020 6:31:00 PM
You shine my friend in all your first place wins.. enjoyed the magical, teasing verses you wrote, Brenda. BIG congrats!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2020 11:20:00 PM
Ahh Vijay thank you so much my friend!:)
Date: 1/26/2020 5:03:00 PM
this is so sweet, Brenda. And it compliments so well the picture that you ut with it. I see it won but do not know in which contest. Anyway, Congrats!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2020 11:19:00 PM
Andrea thank you so much! That's so kind!;)
Date: 1/26/2020 2:56:00 PM
congrats on your win Brenda :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2020 11:19:00 PM
Sandy I appreciate it that thank you!;)
Date: 1/26/2020 2:20:00 PM
Delicate imagery of romantic love.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2020 11:18:00 PM
Sam thank you so much i appreciate it!:)
Date: 1/26/2020 11:29:00 AM
Wonderful write Brenda, I love how the moon inspires poetry like this one, leaves the reader breathless!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2020 11:16:00 PM
Thank you so much john!:)
Date: 1/26/2020 8:03:00 AM
Amazing classical poetry. Love the second stanza..
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2020 8:34:00 AM
Harry thank you so much! I'm overjoyed you like this one! ;)

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