Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Blushing Morns, Nighttime Moons

Tender words on gentle tides 
Where water meets the land
So on the moist breeze rides
To cuddle within warm sand

As sweet thoughts begin fading
Dispelled with the morning dew
Hushed sighs are collaborating
Quickened breath will then ensue

Tickle my mind with silly notions
Gentle waves whispered wishes
Dipped quills in golden emotions
Dreaming nighttime full eclipses

Magical words sweet inspiration
Blushing morns, nighttime moons
Encouraging natures invitation
An  insightfully creative cocoon

1st place in Brian strands contest!

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Juliet Ligon February 20, 2020 at 10:24 PM Beautiful. Brenda Chiri February 21, 2020 at 10:27 AM Thank you so much Juliet I appreciate that!;)

John Fleming January 30, 2020 at 9:01 AM Oh my Gosh you have been busy -- yet another contest! Most definitely you are now one of the Soups most premier contest writers Miss Poetess...and I am certain no one is going to contradict me on that; and before I forget...beautiful poetry also. Many congratulations, Brenda! Lots of affection. :) john Brenda Chiri January 30, 2020 at 7:07 PM Ahhh John thank you so very much! I so appreciate your wonderful comments! As always you bring a smile to my lips!;)

Gary Radice January 27, 2020 at 12:48 PM Congratulations Brenda! :) Brenda Chiri January 27, 2020 at 3:17 PM Gary thank you!;)

Sam Kauffman January 26, 2020 at 9:50 PM Brenda, Congrats and kudos! Brenda Chiri January 26, 2020 at 11:22 PM Sam lol thanks so much!;)

Gershon Wolf January 26, 2020 at 8:39 PM Indeed, a very 'creative cocoon' woven by a talented, passion writer of whispered romance. Bravo, Brenda! Peace and Joy, Gershon (and how about good health too!) Brenda Chiri January 26, 2020 at 11:22 PM Ahh gershon what would I do without you my dear friend! Who always brings a smile to my face!;)

Vijay Pandit January 26, 2020 at 6:31 PM You shine my friend in all your first place wins.. enjoyed the magical, teasing verses you wrote, Brenda. BIG congrats! Brenda Chiri January 26, 2020 at 11:20 PM Ahh Vijay thank you so much my friend!:)

Andrea Dietrich January 26, 2020 at 5:03 PM this is so sweet, Brenda. And it compliments so well the picture that you ut with it. I see it won but do not know in which contest. Anyway, Congrats! Brenda Chiri January 26, 2020 at 11:19 PM Andrea thank you so much! That's so kind!;)

Sandra Adams January 26, 2020 at 2:56 PM congrats on your win Brenda :) Brenda Chiri January 26, 2020 at 11:19 PM Sandy I appreciate it that thank you!;)

Sam Kauffman January 26, 2020 at 2:20 PM Delicate imagery of romantic love. Brenda Chiri January 26, 2020 at 11:18 PM Sam thank you so much i appreciate it!:)

John Hamilton January 26, 2020 at 11:29 AM Wonderful write Brenda, I love how the moon inspires poetry like this one, leaves the reader breathless! Brenda Chiri January 26, 2020 at 11:16 PM Thank you so much john!:)

Harry Horsman January 26, 2020 at 8:03 AM Amazing classical poetry. Love the second stanza.. Brenda Chiri January 26, 2020 at 8:34 AM Harry thank you so much! I'm overjoyed you like this one! ;)