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Blushing Morns, Nighttime Moons

Tender words on gentle tides 
Where water meets the land
So on the moist breeze rides
To cuddle within warm sand

As sweet thoughts begin fading
Dispelled with the morning dew
Hushed sighs are collaborating
Quickened breath will then ensue

Tickle my mind with silly notions
Gentle waves whispered wishes
Dipped quills in golden emotions
Dreaming nighttime full eclipses

Magical words sweet inspiration
Blushing morns, nighttime moons
Encouraging natures invitation
An  insightfully creative cocoon

1st place in Brian strands contest!

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Juliet Ligon Date: 2/20/2020 10:24:00 PM Beautiful. Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 2/21/2020 10:27:00 AM Thank you so much Juliet I appreciate that!;)

John Fleming Date: 1/30/2020 9:01:00 AM Oh my Gosh you have been busy -- yet another contest! Most definitely you are now one of the Soups most premier contest writers Miss Poetess...and I am certain no one is going to contradict me on that; and before I forget...beautiful poetry also. Many congratulations, Brenda! Lots of affection. :) john Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 1/30/2020 7:07:00 PM Ahhh John thank you so very much! I so appreciate your wonderful comments! As always you bring a smile to my lips!;)

Gary Radice Date: 1/27/2020 12:48:00 PM Congratulations Brenda! :) Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 1/27/2020 3:17:00 PM Gary thank you!;)

Sam Kauffman Date: 1/26/2020 9:50:00 PM Brenda, Congrats and kudos! Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 1/26/2020 11:22:00 PM Sam lol thanks so much!;)

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/26/2020 8:39:00 PM Indeed, a very 'creative cocoon' woven by a talented, passion writer of whispered romance. Bravo, Brenda! Peace and Joy, Gershon (and how about good health too!) Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 1/26/2020 11:22:00 PM Ahh gershon what would I do without you my dear friend! Who always brings a smile to my face!;)

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/26/2020 6:31:00 PM You shine my friend in all your first place wins.. enjoyed the magical, teasing verses you wrote, Brenda. BIG congrats! Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 1/26/2020 11:20:00 PM Ahh Vijay thank you so much my friend!:)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/26/2020 5:03:00 PM this is so sweet, Brenda. And it compliments so well the picture that you ut with it. I see it won but do not know in which contest. Anyway, Congrats! Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 1/26/2020 11:19:00 PM Andrea thank you so much! That's so kind!;)

Sandra Adams Date: 1/26/2020 2:56:00 PM congrats on your win Brenda :) Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 1/26/2020 11:19:00 PM Sandy I appreciate it that thank you!;)

Sam Kauffman Date: 1/26/2020 2:20:00 PM Delicate imagery of romantic love. Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 1/26/2020 11:18:00 PM Sam thank you so much i appreciate it!:)

John Hamilton Date: 1/26/2020 11:29:00 AM Wonderful write Brenda, I love how the moon inspires poetry like this one, leaves the reader breathless! Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 1/26/2020 11:16:00 PM Thank you so much john!:)

Harry Horsman Date: 1/26/2020 8:03:00 AM Amazing classical poetry. Love the second stanza.. Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 1/26/2020 8:34:00 AM Harry thank you so much! I'm overjoyed you like this one! ;)