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touched with blush of rose her unopened bud brushed cheeks - a buck's eyes linger 7/25/2017
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Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 8:12 PM
My sister says the deer near her home eat some of her flowers. That is what this made me think of. If you did it monoku style , it could be for the Lust contest!! Nice one, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 8:52 PM
Thanks, Andrea. I have an entry for that one :)
Wood Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 11:39 AM
Nice haiku Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 2:54 PM
Thanks, Dean!
Kiser Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 3:39 AM
Wonderful; fav'd it.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 7:22 AM
Thank you, M.L.
Allison Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 7:21 PM
lovely haiku Kim:-) hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 8:18 PM
Hugs 2...thank U
Wanter Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 6:51 PM
So nice.....
Rodrigues Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 8:18 PM
Thank you :)
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