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touched with blush of rose her unopened bud brushed cheeks - a buck's eyes linger 7/25/2017

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Date: 7/28/2017 8:12:00 PM
My sister says the deer near her home eat some of her flowers. That is what this made me think of. If you did it monoku style , it could be for the Lust contest!! Nice one, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2017 8:52:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. I have an entry for that one :)
Date: 7/27/2017 11:39:00 AM
Nice haiku Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2017 2:54:00 PM
Thanks, Dean!
Date: 7/27/2017 3:39:00 AM
Wonderful; fav'd it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2017 7:22:00 AM
Thank you, M.L.
Date: 7/26/2017 7:21:00 PM
lovely haiku Kim:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2017 8:18:00 PM
Hugs 2...thank U
Date: 7/26/2017 6:51:00 PM
So nice.....
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2017 8:18:00 PM
Thank you :)