Blurred Vision

You see,
The spectacle
Of the beings, paraded
Head to toe, is still quite popular here
On Zarawadi, third moon from the planet Miloshi, in the
Humbolt Quasar. Every waking dream, fresh subjects arrive, unaware
Of their transport to this unfamiliar atmosphere, where you must reach out to
Capture nutrients in zero-gravity, all the while ducking insults hurled by the
Leadbeaters, intent on permanent solutions to seemingly impossible
Challenges facing both sides of this internecine battle for utopian supremacy.
Every evolution of Plybinium Quasar shift, a spectral parade is conducted,
Featuring the energy paths of all previous parades, conducted utilizing
Light-track variations ,amenable to
Time-casting at ones
Discretion, but really,
Quite obvious….

Really

          Quite

                    Obvious



02/08/11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/20/2011 8:36:00 AM
Loved this write Jimbo. I love science fiction movies and naturally space and science programs. Hope all is well with you. Take care. love Phyl
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Date: 2/14/2011 9:01:00 AM
Great write Jimbo!!! how are you, happy Valentine's day, love, Simone
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Date: 2/9/2011 8:11:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today, looking forward to reading more. Dana'lynn
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Date: 2/9/2011 5:56:00 AM
i love the type of poetry you presented..so happy to read you jimbo
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