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Blurred Future

I look forward, I see the long road ahead, I find myself walking on and on, I have gone so far now, Scared to turn back to my old life, I have left my home, I am on the long journey ahead, Fortune teller give me my fortune, Dont be scared to tell the truth, Look closely now, Look at this palm, She cant quite see the long journey ahead, She looks up with a smile, She saw my future, Just a glimps, She see's happiness,hope,love, I feel safe, She also says be carefull for one man is evil, One man is good, Choose the right one, Your path is joy, Choose the wrong one.... There will be no future

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Date: 3/26/2010 9:47:00 AM
You'll choose the right path! I know because you're a smart one, luv! Best of luck with it though.
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Date: 3/2/2010 7:43:00 PM
wow... that is a completely amazing poem! i think it is definitely, definitely my favorite that i have read so far. it is very much like my poems, and i enjoyed it very much. keep writing as well as you are doing, and you will go very far. :)
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Date: 3/2/2010 10:36:00 AM
Wow! This is amazing very good and very deep. This took some time and thought to put this together.
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