Blur

Beauty escapes her
Lovely is her heart
Under quite a blur
Really never to part

Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 6, 2013 at 10:48 AM
seems warm, Russell. love what you did with the word BLUR~ LUV~ SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 4:18 PM
What made you think to do one on Blur, Russell? I think the first line goes well with the theme of blur. If beauty escapes someone,it's as if they were in a blur.
Harrell Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 1:09 PM
Beautiful. I can see the outer and inner beauty all blend into one. Awesome, Russell :)
Horne Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 12:23 PM
lovely write, my friend
Kendrick Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 9:39 AM
Very expressive work..Some people have a beauty all their own..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the kind reviews of my work..Sara
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January 5, 2013 at 7:49 AM
Verrry Good, nice one Russell xx
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