Get Your Premium Membership

Bluebeard

My man is Bluebeard On this holiday for two And I don't want to go To spend every hour asleep or awake With him His voice controlling every action every movement moment. I will be caught in the might of his King Kong grip Alternately controlling then beseeching The needy man child desperate to be loved that makes this monstrous He That must subjugate and control the She To leave nothing to chance In this the field of love To hold and crush in his hot hand the fragile wilting bloom Content with that death for ownership is all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/28/2016 11:14:00 AM
ENJOYING THIS POEM ALL OVER AGAIN. SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 5/3/2015 8:29:00 PM
deirdre, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
Login to Reply
Date: 5/3/2015 8:16:00 PM
DEIRDRE, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 2/4/2015 1:23:00 PM
Later with this insensitive mamma. Welcome to the soup. Love, daver
Login to Reply
Date: 8/6/2014 9:01:00 PM
Deirdre,, Congratulations!!! :) On having your poem featured this week. Stopping by to say hi, and greet almost every poem, on the Poetry Soup's home page. Enjoy having your poem for all to read. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Login to Reply
Date: 8/5/2014 3:43:00 PM
No one wants to be dominated. Good complaint. Congrats on the selection. daver
Login to Reply
Date: 5/25/2014 7:42:00 AM
Hi Deirdre, nice to know you: A beautifully tense worded poem on the hint of Abuse. Hope to see more of your work Welcome!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/22/2014 11:30:00 AM
DEIRDRE, Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Hope you are enjoying the exposure. Hugs & Love ~SKAT~
Login to Reply
Jones Avatar
Deirdre Jones
Date: 5/24/2014 2:59:00 AM
Hi Skat thanks for your welcome. I'm not quite sure how I feel about having the exposure. I've been really busy studying with a deadline so I haven't had too much time to think about it which is probably a good thing.I have been looking at your poems and enjoying the dark in them. Also really like Dandelion dreams. Deirdre
Date: 5/15/2014 10:25:00 AM
Deirdre, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Login to Reply
Jones Avatar
Deirdre Jones
Date: 5/24/2014 3:00:00 AM
Thanks for the welcome Linda I will definitely have a look at the contest page when I have a bit more time and I look forward to reading your poetry too. Deirdre
Date: 5/15/2014 8:45:00 AM
DEIRDRE, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs