Bluebeard

My man is Bluebeard
On this holiday for two
And I don't want to go
To spend every hour asleep or awake 
With him
His voice controlling every action
every movement moment.
I will be caught in the might
of his King Kong grip
Alternately controlling
then beseeching
The needy man child
desperate to be loved
that makes this monstrous He
That must subjugate and control the She
To leave nothing to chance
In this the field of love
To hold and crush in his hot hand
the fragile wilting bloom
Content with that death
for ownership is all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/2/2025 9:09:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/28/2016 11:14:00 AM
ENJOYING THIS POEM ALL OVER AGAIN. SKAT
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Date: 5/3/2015 8:29:00 PM
deirdre, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 5/3/2015 8:16:00 PM
DEIRDRE, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 2/4/2015 1:23:00 PM
Later with this insensitive mamma. Welcome to the soup. Love, daver
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Date: 8/6/2014 9:01:00 PM
Deirdre,, Congratulations!!! :) On having your poem featured this week. Stopping by to say hi, and greet almost every poem, on the Poetry Soup's home page. Enjoy having your poem for all to read. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/5/2014 3:43:00 PM
No one wants to be dominated. Good complaint. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 5/25/2014 7:42:00 AM
Hi Deirdre, nice to know you: A beautifully tense worded poem on the hint of Abuse. Hope to see more of your work Welcome!
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Date: 5/22/2014 11:30:00 AM
DEIRDRE, Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Hope you are enjoying the exposure. Hugs & Love ~SKAT~
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Deirdre Jones
Date: 5/24/2014 2:59:00 AM
Hi Skat thanks for your welcome. I'm not quite sure how I feel about having the exposure. I've been really busy studying with a deadline so I haven't had too much time to think about it which is probably a good thing.I have been looking at your poems and enjoying the dark in them. Also really like Dandelion dreams. Deirdre
Date: 5/15/2014 10:25:00 AM
Deirdre, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Deirdre Jones
Date: 5/24/2014 3:00:00 AM
Thanks for the welcome Linda I will definitely have a look at the contest page when I have a bit more time and I look forward to reading your poetry too. Deirdre
Date: 5/15/2014 8:45:00 AM
DEIRDRE, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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