Bluebeard

My man is Bluebeard
On this holiday for two
And I don't want to go
To spend every hour asleep or awake 
With him
His voice controlling every action
every movement moment.
I will be caught in the might
of his King Kong grip
Alternately controlling
then beseeching
The needy man child
desperate to be loved
that makes this monstrous He
That must subjugate and control the She
To leave nothing to chance
In this the field of love
To hold and crush in his hot hand
the fragile wilting bloom
Content with that death
for ownership is all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 9:09 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:14 AM
ENJOYING THIS POEM ALL OVER AGAIN. SKAT
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May 3, 2015 at 8:29 PM
deirdre, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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May 3, 2015 at 8:16 PM
DEIRDRE, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
Austin Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 1:23 PM
Later with this insensitive mamma. Welcome to the soup. Love, daver
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August 6, 2014 at 9:01 PM
Deirdre,, Congratulations!!! :) On having your poem featured this week. Stopping by to say hi, and greet almost every poem, on the Poetry Soup's home page. Enjoy having your poem for all to read. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Austin Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 3:43 PM
No one wants to be dominated. Good complaint. Congrats on the selection. daver
Sergi Avatar
May 25, 2014 at 7:42 AM
Hi Deirdre, nice to know you: A beautifully tense worded poem on the hint of Abuse. Hope to see more of your work Welcome!
A  Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 11:30 AM
DEIRDRE, Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Hope you are enjoying the exposure. Hugs & Love ~SKAT~
Jones Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 2:59 AM
Hi Skat thanks for your welcome. I'm not quite sure how I feel about having the exposure. I've been really busy studying with a deadline so I haven't had too much time to think about it which is probably a good thing.I have been looking at your poems and enjoying the dark in them. Also really like Dandelion dreams. Deirdre
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May 15, 2014 at 10:25 AM
Deirdre, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Jones Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 3:00 AM
Thanks for the welcome Linda I will definitely have a look at the contest page when I have a bit more time and I look forward to reading your poetry too. Deirdre
A  Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 8:45 AM
DEIRDRE, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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