Blue Words

Blue words cry, 
smearing bare 
               paper walls. 
I am only   this poem
to share.         

   Crimson lines 
ironed, too perfect, 
scratch romantic notions. 
Sorrows brew. 
Shush, 
listen to
each whimper’s escape, 
ink hurled at pages 
not long ago blank. Bittersweet 
sobs thunder -
cathartic storms impart
a verse   to bridge      hearts 
over this deluge.

Words enchant, coax  
from nostalgic dreams,
  over and between
dusk and dawn’s enlightening.
I awaken weightless  
  adrift in lyrical seas.
 
When night returns 
   bruised,    I lie 
with incarnate spirits, 
   my midnight blue disguise. 

A smile     from cobalt eyes 
speaks.       Blues reach
like friends to beseech
my soul. 
While my pen glistens through tears, 
these starry hazels gaze  
as livid-blues turn
cerulean.   A poem breathes -
loose layers, discernible beauty, strength,
prayers answered.   Wise,
I purge my pain
in letter’s curvaceous rise.
  
I rest in hollow 
                         of spaces, 
stolen tranquility.
 
For now, prisoners are released, 
but oh, how I know 
morning 
tightens fear's hold.
When blues speak, 
I'll seek 
           love, acceptance 
and find my pen. 

I’ll unlock my heart again.
 
May my poem birthed 
remind in lonely hours 
of my power, 
my worth.  
May light 
             fall 
upon God’s poema.

Ink-stained, I am
one woman heard, 
only blue words.                
   
(200 words)
5/31/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/17/2017 7:56:00 AM
Owwww, how wonderful you write! Breathless and speechless. One blue metaphor after another. Awesome and congratulations
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Date: 2/15/2017 2:06:00 PM
Astounding metaphors and creativity so well expressed in your pen, Rhonda! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 2/15/2017 10:24:00 AM
Good to read this again Rhonda. It still causes a short-gasped quick breath coaxed by the line breaks and the passion. Congrats on your placement..this will always be a winner...
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Date: 2/15/2017 9:30:00 AM
Rhonda- exactly what I was looking for in a free verse! sadly beautiful...thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 6/15/2015 8:35:00 PM
A woman as perfect poetry, blue welcomes her on every suraface of love's survival Rhonda...J.A.B.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/15/2015 9:48:00 PM
Thanks, Justin...I can see and feel you love and respect for women. It's in your poetry and your contests. Hugs, Rhonda
Date: 6/15/2015 4:48:00 PM
Hi Rhonda...couldn't catch my breath, literally. This is a masterpiece, a creative marvel. That flows and meanders thoughts and emotions, but in a simple a form as can be described. Simply pen and paper..congrats on your win(7)...rgds, Tbang
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Date: 6/14/2015 12:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win :)Alexis
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Date: 6/14/2015 6:17:00 AM
Just stopping back to congratulate you on the win. Back in the 70's there was a song, I think it was a song or a slogan, I AM WOMAN - HEAR ME ROAR. This write would make the MGM lion blush.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2015 11:44:00 AM
Yes, I remember that song...Helen Reddy, right? Trust me, I'm not that tough, but I'm roaring on the inside! Poetry helps me release the lion once in awhile. Thanks for the visit. Hugs, Rhonda
Date: 6/4/2015 10:41:00 AM
What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.
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Date: 6/3/2015 8:56:00 AM
Rhonda, I love how you craft your poetry.. graceful, powerful, arouses my nerves and thoughts.. =') lovely in every way..~olive eloisa
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Date: 6/1/2015 12:52:00 AM
"I've released my prisoners"...that is how I feel when I am writing... There are so many amazing lines in this moving piece. An excellent poem, Rhonda!
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Date: 5/31/2015 8:28:00 PM
Rhonda, the catharsis of poetry has rekindled the embers of life into the flame of living....keep writing...from what I know of you through your poetry you are one helluva woman...
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Date: 5/31/2015 6:27:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem. And you are not just a woman, you are SOME Great Woman! And I hope you will keep your heart open....Darlene
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Date: 5/31/2015 2:19:00 PM
such a rainbow of imagery Rhonda - so so creative I am in awe of you being 'just a woman' :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/31/2015 12:45:00 PM
Rhonda, this is a MASTERPIECE! Your creative descriptive language drew me in and wouldn't let me go! I love it! Love, KIm
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Date: 5/31/2015 11:46:00 AM
Being a woman you are a nice poetess and blessed by God, i feel, so you write beautiful poems always. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 5/31/2015 11:29:00 AM
And yet we have all crossed that lonely bridge, like a sparrow small in a storm, fighting ourselves,the world , holding tight to the final shard of strength, gasping for breath, searching for hope not to be denied.. my first thought after reading this well written poem my poetic friend
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