Blue Velvet

BLUE VELVET--- (Written for Paul Mansfield) time again to document this submarine immersion scene the pleasure is all mine to glide and flow finally let go to disappear and hide dreaming cool blue parting in pool nerves send shimmering signals through my hands and fingers then…. floating and drifting in silent ballet clear light blends nights hue as dreams include you triumph of the heart that gives all breath from Velvet Red lungs with palms full of stars we throw them like dice repeatedly until our desired constellation appears our perfect diamond Velvet Blue spheres © Kim van Breda—June 2014
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June 14, 2014 at 10:41 PM
I absolutely adore the last stanza Kim..hugs Tim
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June 14, 2014 at 3:04 PM
Beautiful imagery where the senses have a field day! Your colour blue gives this write an aura of swirling fantasy...passion in a dreamy mist. Very enjoyable and captivating. // paul
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June 14, 2014 at 11:23 AM
- Your words are impressive .... a skilled poem Kim! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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