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Blue tears

Blue sky so far up The lady with a sad face sit and stare Blue tears slipping down unnoticed

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Date: 11/2/2021 2:11:00 PM
Very blue. Yet beautiful poem. Thank you.
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Date: 8/4/2018 6:13:00 AM
A beautiful poem, Akkina. Blue sky happiness always hides the sad smile behind the cerulean facade. Your short, masterful ink strokes convey deep truths shown in plain sight. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 12/25/2017 10:47:00 AM
Pure sadness...
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Date: 12/24/2017 1:23:00 PM
gosh, I really love little poems like this one and this is one I have not even seen of yours yet. This one makes me think that you could make it into a free verse poem and personify the woman as the blue lake and a waterfall coming off her are the tears. It was the thought your imagery conjured for me. Have a lovely Xmas eve, Akkina.
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Date: 9/3/2017 11:08:00 AM
Hi Akkina , beautiful write my dear friend , my belly is full of mango's I ate two giant size today lol yummy ::))) hugs
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Date: 9/3/2017 11:51:00 AM
Lol! it's such a delicious fruit can't help eating lots of it :) it's healthy so you're good. Eat all you want. Im going to buy more today. Hugs and smiles my dear friend. Been very busy lately but I'll come by your page soon. :)
Date: 8/18/2017 8:06:00 PM
Hi Akkina, this is so tender and beautiful. A peek at a private moment of sadness. Well done my friend!
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Date: 8/5/2017 4:14:00 PM
So much emotion and so few words, very nice haiku well done Kina well done.
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Date: 6/10/2017 7:13:00 AM
...the privacy of "blue tears" and the loneliness that accompanies them....well done Akkina.....
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Akkina Downing
Date: 6/10/2017 9:00:00 AM
Thanks so much John :)
Date: 5/18/2017 3:56:00 PM
Hello Akkina. I'll say blue tears. Emotion and sadness come through to the reader. The saddest part is the unnoticed tears. Well done entirely. Enjoy the night.
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Date: 5/18/2017 4:03:00 PM
Thank you, Lisa :)
Date: 5/16/2017 2:59:00 PM
- Sounds very sad ... great written, Akkina - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/16/2017 4:33:00 PM
Yes she was... thank you Anne-Lise :) hugs
Date: 5/9/2017 9:53:00 PM
Very meaningful..suffering in silence and no one would ever know. Very touching poem. Keep up the great work.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 5/9/2017 10:02:00 PM
Thank you Laken, I appreciate your kind words :) Hugs
Date: 4/29/2017 11:09:00 AM
I feel your pain Akkina ~ love the sky/tear connection.
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Date: 5/5/2017 5:40:00 PM
Thanks Phil :)
Date: 4/27/2017 10:53:00 AM
Lovely, but sad, Akkina. Perhaps the blue sky could help her find peace in her heart. Regards // paul
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Date: 4/27/2017 12:37:00 PM
Perhaps :) thank you Paul!
Date: 4/25/2017 4:29:00 PM
Hi Akkina, yes there are a lot of tears go unnoticed in this world enough to fill a lake:)) lovely write Akkina:)) hugs
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Akkina Downing
Date: 4/25/2017 4:38:00 PM
This is true, Nail, and thank you :) hugs
Date: 4/25/2017 9:09:00 AM
Brilliant haiku Akkina...a fav...^WW^
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Date: 4/25/2017 9:15:00 AM
You're a fine warrior WW :) thank you so muc... hugs
Date: 4/25/2017 8:20:00 AM
Heavenly Haiku dear Akkina! A 7!
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Date: 4/25/2017 8:48:00 AM
Awe thank you so much :) hugs
Date: 4/23/2017 3:46:00 PM
Beautiful haiku Akkina.. best wishes
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Akkina Downing
Date: 4/23/2017 3:47:00 PM
Thank you so much Joseph :)