Blue Sky

Standing under the blue sky Heart of mine doesn't lie Blue ocean kisses my bare feet Luminosity of the sun delight Chilled wind plays with long hair Let me feel this beautiful landscape I have nothing to fear My aim is as high as these mountains Dreams may be like the fountains Thoughts are as deep as abyss Soul may be the Morning Bliss Standing under the blue sky Heart of mine doesn't lie.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/19/2018 11:07:00 AM

Sucheta, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this marvelous community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I TOO am ready to enjoy and follow you and your poetry if you'd like :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup 2018 :) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/17/2018 4:58:00 AM

Wonderful poem, Sucheta. Enjoyed very much.

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/6/2018 2:49:00 AM

So true, "Standing under the blue sky Heart of mine doesn't lie." A very conscious poem...Blessings to you Sucheta