Blue Seats

Stained blue seats lay docile
Awaiting to be snuggled 
They give it their all
to be very comfortable
But lingering heat kills it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ashford Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 9:11 AM
No idea what this is about, but the blue seat' theme intrigues. I like the simplicity and neatness of this work.
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June 11, 2019 at 12:10 AM
Wonderfully built tanka, Jeff. Welcome to Poetry Soup!
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