Notes About The Poem

Written 26th August, 2026 for Weekly Challenge.

Blue-ringed octopuses (Hapalochlaena) are small, usually palm-sized cephalopods found in shallow Australian coastal waters, rock pools, and reef habitats. At rest they are often brown or beige and easily overlooked; when disturbed, vivid iridescent blue rings or lines flash across their skin as a warning.

They are among the sea’s most venomous animals. Their bite can inject tetrodotoxin, a powerful nerve toxin that can cause numbness, paralysis, and respiratory failure; bites may be painless, and there is no antivenom, so urgent medical care and assisted breathing are vital. They generally bite only if handled, harassed, or crushed.

A remarkable detail: the warning display is exceptionally fast—its blue rings can flare into view in roughly one-third of a second. Despite their danger, these are shy animals: look, never touch. 

 

Blue Rings

Tide thins over pitted sandstone.  
A knot of kelp loosens itself.  
Under a skin of clear water,  
something palm-sized breathes  
among seagrass and Neptune’s necklace.  

A bare foot pauses above the pool.  
A child’s hand makes a shadow.  
Its arms pour through a crack in the stone,  
tasting the rock with pale suckers.  

The creature answers  
with rings of impossible light—  
beautiful as jewellery.  

Now blue:  
not sky-blue, not water-blue—  
blue struck from a wire,  
blue coins opening,  
small halos switched on  
around dark centres,  
exact as a warning sign.  

The tide turns in the pool,  
lifting the necklace of beads.  
One by one, the blue coins close.  

It becomes a dark shadow,  
folded into the rock’s breathing—  
a small secrecy the tide cannot name.
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Godwin Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 7:17 PM
My heart beat faster with each verse of action/concern. I fell in love with octopuses a couple of years ago and watch every documentary I can find but never heard of these guys. I must have missed a documentary somewhere along the way. Thank you for this poem. Have you seen Sally Field's movie with the octopus? (I regret the title escapes me at the moment.) It was a joy to watch and not just because of the octopus.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 6:10 AM
Thanks , I believe the movie was Remarkably Bright Creatures 🐙, I haven't seen it but love them also. They are quite intelligent.❤️
Onclaud Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 2:39 PM
a thrill to read you today, ali...you paint a mood of wonder, of anticipation by leading me to a space of the unknown...both vicarios and experiential!
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 6:08 AM
Thank you Nette, it was something blue ... ❤️
Hind Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 12:48 PM
This has suspense, I liked the child references, a beautiful poem, Alison 🌹
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 2:27 PM
Thanks Paige, 🌹❤️
Rodrigues Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 11:44 AM
Whew…love your description and poem too. Beautiful and dangerous!
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 2:27 PM
Thanks Kim, look but dont touch.❤️
Goldsmith Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 9:53 AM
Your "Blue Rings" Is a wonderful write for a wonderful picture. Love Both... Thanks for the added information. Have a Lovely day Writing Away............
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 2:25 PM
Thank you ❤️
Poet Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 8:53 AM
What a beautiful and vivid poem, Allison! You managed to capture the magical and mysterious world within a tide pool. The imagery is striking and transports the reader to the scene, allowing them to truly visualize and feel the wonder of nature. The way you describe the creature and its interaction with the environment is genuinely enchanting. Well done!
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 2:25 PM
Thank you so much Sotto.🦑💙
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