Karen Jones Poet Rhyme

Notes About The Poem

For Let it Rain Contest sponsored by Nette Oncloud

Blue Rain’s Pain

Tears from heaven offer me pity
As raindrops smell and sing solemn ditty 
For rebirth chance of dreams to follow
Hope for growth for new life tomorrow 

Like a sign I spot chick in nest
Mother bird with wing does her best
To shelter it despite cold touch blue rain
I shall as well try motherhood again

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Krishnanand Guptar January 29, 2026 at 5:52 AM Congratulations Karen on your win in this contest on your lovely poem on rain and its possible negative impact on rebirth. This is an unusual and interesting view as (soft) rain is generally taken as having a positive impact on nature and rebirth in general. Wishing you a lovely day. Karen Jones January 29, 2026 at 6:30 AM Thanks and blessings to you!

Gershon Wolf January 21, 2026 at 8:30 PM Last line gives this poem so much added depth, Karen. Really stopped me in my tracks and made me ponder the universe. Thanks, gw P.S. Check Soup Mail please Karen Jones January 21, 2026 at 8:46 PM Really? Ok

CayCay Godwin January 21, 2026 at 6:42 AM No wonder, the struggle was probably a fun challenge though as set up by the 'unexpected' and 'delightful' direction you took for your rain. I very much like your unique take and think it's got plenty of 'sense' about it!! CayCay Karen Jones January 21, 2026 at 7:23 AM You are kind! Thanks

Kim Rodrigues January 21, 2026 at 5:00 AM Beautiful! Enjoyed very much! Karen Jones January 21, 2026 at 5:32 AM Thank you Kim!