Blue Pill Or Red Pill

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Unseeking Seeker.

Who we are, we tend to forget Transfixed in thoughts, desires beget The rot, dear hearts, has sunk in deep Our consciousness needs a reset Witness cravings upon us creep Into core of heart, they thus seep So unless we choose to be still We’ll feel not, the divine bliss beep Matrix question: blue or red pill As with Neo, we use free will Choosing to plunge into the void That soul fissures, Gods grace does fill 18-June-2022

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/18/2022 5:21:00 AM

Blue or red, black or white, I think I’ve tried them all seeker, my fissures are still open, my material desire does sometimes fill them, but only til the next one comes along, excellent poem and wording, cheers David

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/22/2022 4:11:00 AM

Thank you, David