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Blue On Blue

blue jay way up high
a peacock on the river
forget-me-not dusk

sea holly shimmer
the blue dandelion days
sapphires in starlight

wet starfish creeping
starling in hydrangeas
neptune, uranus
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Wolf Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 3:57 PM
From the depths of the sky to the outer limits of the solar system, 'Blue rings True!' Lovely penning, Evelyn! Light and Delight! :) Gershon
Buehler Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 4:44 PM
Nice to know that beyond the blue horizon, there is yet more blue! Thank you for the happy thoughts, Gershon. Smiles and Good Cheer, Evelyn :)
Poet Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 8:50 AM
Evelyn, you're filled with abundant nature's imagery and creative metaphors on the color blue, a lovely Haiku. Superb!
Buehler Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 12:25 PM
Thank you for your appreciation of my efforts, my friend. Happy Thanksgiving. :)
Kalita Avatar
November 24, 2021 at 10:12 PM
A beautiful write on blue with such prolific nature's imageries and vivid metaphors.. Splendid!
Buehler Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 12:27 PM
Thank you so much, Silpika. Happy Thanksgiving. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
November 24, 2021 at 11:48 AM
You could make a short film with all these ages. ~~
Buehler Avatar
November 24, 2021 at 12:08 PM
That's a lovely thought, Victor. Thank you.
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