Victor Buhagiar Poet Pantoum

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Blue Moon Shine On Me

O lonely blue moon, shine a bit for me.
I just wander here and there aimlessly.
Come dear wan moon, shine brightly so I'll see,
Search for my dear one to love faithfully.


I just wander here and there aimlessly.
She would not tolerate my advances
Search for my dear one to love faithfully.
She will never accept my mischances.


She would not tolerate my advances
I was so foolish not to treat her well.
She will never accept my mischances.
How I miss her, only the Lord can tell.


I was so foolish not to treat her well.
Come dear wan moon, shine brightly so I'll see,
How I miss her, only the Lord can tell.
O lonely blue moon, shine a bit for me.

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14 April 2021
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