Saanvi Dua Poet Light Verse

Blue Moon of the Lake

The ripples formed , 
some cool , some warm , 
the Moon's reflection , 
glaring on the lake ...

The starry night , 
light and bright , 
the Blue Moon of the lake , 
ripples making it shake ...

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MY FIRST POEM OF 2014 !! GOT THIS TOPIC FROM SMURFS .........

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Stephan McBride January 13, 2016 at 10:50 AM Very captivating love how you pull one into the picture.

Joe Maverick February 23, 2015 at 2:24 AM Hello Saanvi, I think this is a cool write, the last two lines are quite fun with the 'shaking' moon..' nice to hear about the Smurf connection, 'shows a receptive mind..'

Andrea Dietrich January 16, 2014 at 9:20 PM how sweet, and getting it from the smurfs. that is sure cute. I like a short little poem like this!

Dr.Ram Mehta January 11, 2014 at 12:11 AM Enjoyed the write and congratulations on the win, Saanvi

Poet Destroyer A January 10, 2014 at 11:25 PM Congratulations Saanvi, ... If you'd like take a trip to my blog ----> ON THE ROCKS------ http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=18527&PoetID=18720 <---- enjoy if you'd like... Love Always & Forever <3 LINDA <3

Joe Maverick January 6, 2014 at 3:15 PM Good expressive imagery in this Saanvi, i thank you for your interest in my writes, and comments, Joe.