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Blue__ Aeons past when chaos raged, with acrid SMELLS and YELLOW flames, Explosions cast the moon from earths embrace. Blue__ Skies will fade as eventide SHOWS SILVER rays Cascading from moons mirrored light. Blue__ Oceans roaring SOUND of waves, where on their crests WHITE horses chase those turning tides. Blue__ FEELINGS seem to emanate, from where deep COBALT shadows creep, And melancholy hides behind her changing face. Blue__ Glows the moon when she is veiled, enshrouded by volcanic ash, A bitter TASTE of smoke from molten lava's SCARLET flames. ( smell, yellow, show, silver, sound, white, feelings, cobalt, taste, scarlet ) As moonlight dances with the rites of spring, sweet smells of yellow daffodils, Will float upon the evening's breeze. While moon herself, will fly across the stars at night with grace, And show her silver face, beguilingly on heaven's stage. Pale moon is queen and rules our waves, she ebbs then flows white surf on tides, The sound of paradise sublime. Good feelings rise when she shows where, her light will steer lost souls at night, Until deep cobalt skies once more appear. Unbidden moon of scarlet tastes would lengthen Holy Lenten days, Unless outcast, this Belewe moon she will BETRAY. 10 / 22 / 2015.

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Date: 11/14/2015 9:58:00 PM
This poem is simply Divine George! I am fav'ing it! Congratulations on your top win with this outstanding beauty! #7
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George Seal
Date: 11/16/2015 9:56:00 AM
Hello Connie, what wonderful comments you have bestowed on me. I do appreciate your kindness. Please accept my most warmest regards. Thankyou George.
Date: 11/12/2015 1:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, well done!
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Date: 11/13/2015 3:41:00 AM
Hello Laura, thanks for offering your congratulations to me for my poem, i do appreciate you doing so. My regards to you. Cheers, George
Date: 11/12/2015 6:41:00 AM
Gorgeous piece, congratulations.
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George Seal
Date: 11/13/2015 3:36:00 AM
Hi Richard, thankyou for your kind remarks about my poem. They are very much appreciated. My regards to you. George
Date: 11/11/2015 3:54:00 PM
Congratulations in your win.
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George Seal
Date: 11/12/2015 3:44:00 AM
Hello Nayda, i very much appreciate your visit to my poetry site, and thank you for your kind remarks. My warmest regards to you. George.
Date: 11/11/2015 2:16:00 PM
Congrats on your creative win..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 11/12/2015 3:47:00 AM
Hi Sara, you are very kind with your most welcome support of my poems. I do appreciate it. My kindest regards to you. George.p
Date: 11/11/2015 11:32:00 AM
Very cleverly penned George congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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George Seal
Date: 11/12/2015 3:53:00 AM
Hello Jan, i do appreciate your constant support of my poetry. Once agaiin i thank you so much for doing so. My most warmest regards to you. Cheers, George.
Date: 11/11/2015 9:41:00 AM
George, nice win. SKAT
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George Seal
Date: 11/13/2015 2:26:00 AM
Hi SKAT, thankyou for your continued support. My regards to you. George.
Date: 11/11/2015 9:40:00 AM
Your poem was amazing, in this especially challenging contest !! Well done! A big congratulations on your win!
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George Seal
Date: 11/13/2015 2:30:00 AM
Hello Carrie, thankyou for your most generous comments on my poem. I appreciate you doing so. My warmest regards to you. George.
Date: 11/11/2015 8:43:00 AM
Very expressive words, George. I'm honored to be chosen on the level of yours. Congratulations.
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George Seal
Date: 11/13/2015 2:42:00 AM
Hello Lin, thankyou for being so kind. I must also congratulate you on your poem gaining first place in what i considered to be a very difficult task to even enter the competition. Please accept my warmest regads. George
Date: 11/11/2015 8:30:00 AM
George, very clever write, very well thought out. Great last line in bottom poem.
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George Seal
Date: 11/13/2015 2:35:00 AM
Hi James, thankyou for being so kind with your comments about my poem. I do truly appreciate them. My regards to you. Cheers. George.
Date: 11/11/2015 7:52:00 AM
Congrats on your 1st place win George! This is a wonderful write and well done for this difficult contest. Thank you for entering into my contest.
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George Seal
Date: 11/12/2015 3:22:00 AM
Hello Tammy, thankyou for most generous comments on my entry in your contest. It was my pleasure to take part, the first place was the icing on the cake. I am over the moon, blue of course. My kindest regards to you. Cheers, George.
Date: 10/23/2015 1:34:00 PM
Some very nicely thought out lines, George. Best regards! :) john
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Date: 11/3/2015 3:40:00 AM
Hi John, thankyou for reading my poem prior to the contest and commenting so kindly. Cheers, George.

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