Stephen Blencowe Poet Blank verse

Blue Moon

I'm lost inside your world...
       Hang on every word...
       A love I can't afford...
       I breaks my heart...
       Sapping my hopes..
       Draining my dreams...
       I live my life in a constant
       daze...
       Confused,bewitched and
       bewildered...
       Hot under the collar...
       My love is far too young...
       It's painfully naive..
       For a man matured in years..
       I worry...
       About the money...
       Living faraway from friends...
       about the years I have not got...
       And yes I love too much..
       Your always on my mind...
       Not to sure if that's healthy...
       You make me feel ten feet tall...
       And then I fall..
       Or hit the wall...
       I am a fool...
       For believing dreams come true..
       They only make you blue...

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 29, 2011 at 11:57 AM Congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week Stephen. Love, Carol

Steven Cooke July 26, 2011 at 2:38 PM sad, but i like it. tomorrows another day, good poetry.

Carol Sunshine Brown July 26, 2011 at 1:51 PM Hope you are having a wonderful week Stephen. I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today. Love, Carol Stephen Blencowe July 26, 2011 at 3:06 PM thank you carol I read one of yours and sometimes wish I could be to the point but that is the beauty of poetry

Jack Ross Jr. July 26, 2011 at 1:29 PM wow, too sad...Nice write...God bless...Old Jack Stephen Blencowe July 26, 2011 at 1:34 PM thank-you old jack..