blue moon

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07/25/25

timorous blue moon plays peek a boo in brooding clouds distant thunder claps

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/26/2025 7:35:00 AM

Blue moon is rare to see. Lovely haiku. Hugs.

Jack Horne

Date: 7/26/2025 5:56:00 AM

love this scene you've conjured up

Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2025 6:16:00 AM

Thanks Jack, it was good to write it when I was at the folk even on Thursday and i love the song and Rod's version is super:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/25/2025 2:32:00 AM

- Great haiku, Jan :) - hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2025 2:35:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise, I wrote it when i was at a folk music event - the words 'timid moon' were used so I based my idea on that:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 7/25/2025 1:31:00 AM

It’s a charming vision, Jan. I’m going to think of thunder applauding the peek a boo game instead of being threatening. He can roar until he too is blue in the face. Love the song.

Lin Lane
Date: 7/26/2025 2:40:00 AM

Post more poop. People like to laugh… and some say it’s not worthy poetry. Ha!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2025 2:34:00 AM

Thanks Lin:-) funny i get more comments when i post poop lol:-) hugs jan xx