Blue Mist

Early morning wind, 
Reflection, 
Sparkles the soft dew, 
Operatic larks croon, 
Silent fading moon, 
Young minds occupied, 
Triumphant, 
Eyes glare, 
Noise, 
Iron carriages unaware, 
Relinquish the thought. 

The great deity has chosen, 
Now, 
Friends of the morning depart with a frown, 
No knowledge, 
No pain, 
No thoughts of why, 
Onward from mortal life, 
Unto paradise they safely fly. 
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mackenzie Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 5:29 PM
Glad you like it Jessica....
Arteaga Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 10:07 PM
gods? or men coming out day daze or dazed mind? every interesting and such a great flow words put together that makes this poem read and feel smooth.
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