Probir Gupta Poet Monoku

Blue Louver

In the very morning your blue louver comes down everyday in a dense darkness

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                           12/10/2016 
                          Sad one line contest of Silent One

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Teddy Kimathi October 14, 2016 at 8:40 AM Congrats Probir, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-) Probir Gupta October 14, 2016 at 11:39 AM Thank you ...

Alexis Y. October 13, 2016 at 6:45 PM Hi Probir, You have penned a sad poetic one liner. Congratulations on your 2nd place win: -) Alexis Probir Gupta October 14, 2016 at 5:44 AM Thank you, Alexis ... probir

Beautiful Scars October 13, 2016 at 11:38 AM very sadly beautiful Probir...congrats on your placement :)-luloo Probir Gupta October 14, 2016 at 5:45 AM thank you ... probir ...

Augustus Black October 12, 2016 at 8:00 PM Nice nice Sir. Congratulation. Probir Gupta October 13, 2016 at 12:10 AM Thank you ...

Anne-Lise Andresen October 12, 2016 at 11:06 AM - Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Probir Gupta October 13, 2016 at 12:10 AM Thank you , Anne ...

Charlie Smith October 12, 2016 at 10:13 AM Congratulations Probir, well written Probir Gupta October 13, 2016 at 12:11 AM Thanks Charlie ... so nice of you ...

Afzal Nusker October 12, 2016 at 7:24 AM Absolutely wonderful one liner. Probir Gupta October 12, 2016 at 7:46 AM Thank you ...

Demetrios Trifiatis October 12, 2016 at 5:44 AM Yes, it is sad dear, Probir! Wish the outcome to be a happy one! Good luck! Probir Gupta October 12, 2016 at 6:02 AM Well said ... happy outcome to a sad theme ... thank you in advance for the -- .....probir

Anne-Lise Andresen October 12, 2016 at 2:50 AM - Well done, Probir - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Probir Gupta October 12, 2016 at 5:43 AM Thank you, Anne ...

White Wolf October 11, 2016 at 10:44 PM Good luck in the contest Probir, Love it /|\ Probir Gupta October 12, 2016 at 2:21 AM Thank you ...