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Blue Lizard

Looking dead to me 
With its feet up in the air
Goodbye dead lizard

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Sara Kendrick

November 30, 2009 at 5:29 PM

Interesting write. Welcome to soup. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

John Heck

December 8, 2008 at 2:50 PM

A very interestin haiku. I've been to Arizona a few times, I love lizards and iguanas too! Peace always, John

Derrick Burton

December 7, 2008 at 10:01 AM

wow, deep back in the day i owned a monitor, got rid of it and though its nature got really tired of seeing it kill mice, great poem.

Michael Torres

December 5, 2008 at 4:08 PM

Jordan thanks for your comment's . You paint a clear picture here. Looking forward to more of your works Michael

Anna Kittrell

December 5, 2008 at 12:48 PM

I love this! What an image...a little stiff lizard looking up at you. Funny! Keep writing, Jordan Love, Anna

Abe Lopez

December 4, 2008 at 5:54 PM

This is a great haiku. keep up the good work, I'm proud of you........nice

Raul Moreno

December 4, 2008 at 5:38 PM

Jordan where are my manners, I forgot to welcome you to poetry soup. Consider writing a haiku about your last name. Lonewolf is a cool name...Raul

Barbara Gorelick

December 4, 2008 at 5:19 PM

HI Jordan, glad your hear with us in the soup. This is a very nice haiku. Are you an American Indian? ( the beautiful name)

Raul Moreno

December 4, 2008 at 4:36 PM

Nice Haiku, sounds like a beautiful painting. Keep it up, I look forward to reading more...Raul

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