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Blue Lizard

Looking dead to me With its feet up in the air Goodbye dead lizard

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Date: 11/30/2009 5:29:00 PM

Interesting write. Welcome to soup. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

Date: 12/8/2008 2:50:00 PM

A very interestin haiku. I've been to Arizona a few times, I love lizards and iguanas too! Peace always, John

Date: 12/7/2008 10:01:00 AM

wow, deep back in the day i owned a monitor, got rid of it and though its nature got really tired of seeing it kill mice, great poem.

Date: 12/5/2008 4:08:00 PM

Jordan thanks for your comment's . You paint a clear picture here. Looking forward to more of your works Michael

Date: 12/5/2008 12:48:00 PM

I love this! What an image...a little stiff lizard looking up at you. Funny! Keep writing, Jordan Love, Anna

Date: 12/4/2008 5:54:00 PM

This is a great haiku. keep up the good work, I'm proud of you........nice

Date: 12/4/2008 5:38:00 PM

Jordan where are my manners, I forgot to welcome you to poetry soup. Consider writing a haiku about your last name. Lonewolf is a cool name...Raul

Date: 12/4/2008 5:19:00 PM

HI Jordan, glad your hear with us in the soup. This is a very nice haiku. Are you an American Indian? ( the beautiful name)

Date: 12/4/2008 4:36:00 PM

Nice Haiku, sounds like a beautiful painting. Keep it up, I look forward to reading more...Raul