Blue Jean Moon

there's a blue jean moon 
  out there tonight 
   you know, the one that's got 
    that look in its eye 
     like it's got 
      a million places to go 
       and it doesn't know 
         where to start 
          or who to call first
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Devonshire Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gerry, I love your descriptive language in "blue jean moon." And I can feel your excitement grow as the moon beckons. Thanks for sharing! Carolyn
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February 19, 2009 at 4:15 AM
I love this piece alot. Love the title..love the shape of the piece..good writing.
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