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Nine facts that keep blue jays soaring

Blue Jay Blues

vibrant blue jay trills
  of notes like jazzy rhythm--
amidst winter blues




Tania Kitchin's Contest
Haiku-Blue Jay
5/12/2020

birdseasonssonghaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

May 15, 2020 at 9:28 PM

Lovely and creative take on it! Congrats, Nette.

Reason A. Poteet

May 15, 2020 at 11:22 AM

A winter time treat any cold day. Wonderful, nette. Congratulations! Love your pic too.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 15, 2020 at 11:20 AM

I love this one. Back with congratulations Nette! xomo

MD Johnson

May 15, 2020 at 6:34 AM

This one is my favorite. Very clever. Regards —MDJ

Regina Mcintosh

May 14, 2020 at 10:06 PM

Awesome haiku. Blessings dear friend... Love, Gina

Jan Allison

May 14, 2020 at 5:37 PM

dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

May 14, 2020 at 3:35 PM

Congrats on your win Nette!

Tania Kitchin

May 14, 2020 at 2:36 PM

Nette, congratulations on your first place win with your beautiful haiku!

Nette Onclaud

May 14, 2020 at 4:44 PM

tania, am so thrilled with my top win... thanks lots and huggs

Caren Krutsinger

May 14, 2020 at 12:31 PM

Congratulations Maestro! You earned a placement; loved the photo and the poem.

David Drowley

May 14, 2020 at 12:22 PM

'Nette, Congratulations on your placement."Jazzy rhythm" is a great touch. David'

John Watt

May 14, 2020 at 12:19 PM

Nette, I do love your jazzy haiku! What a creative take on the contest - congrats for your #1 placement ~ John

Aditi Mishra

May 14, 2020 at 11:54 AM

This is musical :) Congratulations Nette!

Kai Michael Neumann

May 13, 2020 at 4:10 AM

Nice one Nette. The power of tackling the winter blues ...

Joseph May

May 12, 2020 at 6:29 PM

Lovely haiku Nette

James Peranteau

May 12, 2020 at 6:09 PM

Lord! Such a beautiful poem and just as beautiful poesy....I’ floating dear poet! Have a wonderful week nette...much love, james

Mohan Chutani

May 12, 2020 at 8:45 AM

Nette, blues all the way. Best. Mohan

Jan Allison

May 12, 2020 at 7:51 AM

music to my ears Nette, a delightful haiku:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 12, 2020 at 7:48 AM

I can hear it! :))) xomo!

Vijay Pandit

May 12, 2020 at 7:17 AM

Rhythm and trills adorn your poem--beautifully done, Nette.

Tom Cunningham

May 12, 2020 at 7:02 AM

Love the image Nette. Good luck Tom

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