Blue Jay

bright blue sapphire blinks
bejeweled midst blue spruce bush ...
blur blueberry sky


14 March 2022
Bird Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
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Deschler Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 10:01 AM
Very pretty! I like the vibrant blue imagery in this poem. Well done! Congratulations on your win!
Kendrick Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 6:36 AM
Very descriptive and expressive winning work. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 1:46 PM
Congratulations on your win. A Lovely/Colorful write. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
Roper Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 9:31 PM
Great imagery, Christuraj, congratulations on your win on Tania Kitchin's Bird Haiku contest.
Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 9:16 PM
wowie, SO good this is. I just love the alliteration. Gonna fave this one!
Callus Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 11:46 AM
Alliteration and the color 'blue' have made quite an impact in this blue jay poem, Christuraj! Congratulation son your fine win. ~ Regards // paul
Kerr Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 1:15 AM
Well done, Christuraj. Excellent in every respect. Howard
Gasun Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 12:50 AM
Wow! This is wonderful haiku with alliteration about one of the prettiest bird my dear friend. Big Congratulations on this awesome write and win. Thanks for sharing. Hugs
Buehler Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 9:57 PM
This is beautiful, Christuraj. Congratulations on your win, my friend. :)
Goff Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 7:43 PM
Lovely 'ku Christuraj! Congrats!
Alex Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 8:38 PM
Thank you very much.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 6:42 PM
Wonderful alliteration, Christuraj! Superb description - Blue Jay is a beautiful bird! Warm wishes ~ Mala
Alex Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 8:38 PM
Thank you very much.
Alex Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 8:38 PM
Thank you very much.
Kitchin Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 4:49 PM
Christuraj, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku, love the first line!
Alex Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 8:38 PM
Thank you very much.
Kauffman Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 2:26 PM
So wonderfully creative Chris! Love the "blue" alliteration. All the best for the contest.
Alex Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 8:37 PM
Thank you very much.
George Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 8:52 PM
This is fantastic ! Blinking bejeweled blue Jay ! All the best in the contest, Chris!
Alex Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 8:58 PM
Thank you very much.
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